Golden Star Dust

Golden Star Dust

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet

My heart ascends
lost to imagination
and intense longings

A pen so full of ink
paper filled with lines
my hand anxious to bleed
the hearts desires

My ink ignites
believing in things
like you
my eyes
a deeper
moody blue
wanting to find
something true
to engulf
the fluidity
of my emotions

Please Love
let my love
Speak to beats
creating lyrical imageries
sharing vocabulary
of conscious thought
uncontrollable tunes
at maximum volume
spilling flows
of desires
wantonness

My ink sends
chills to the
Warm-blooded
veins in the bodies
of those who
cling to heat
hearts that
bang a beat

I shutter
in cold seas
of emptiness
and wake up
with the taste
of nouns
on my tongue
creativity
draws hearts
silhouette

Intellectually
swirling in Aeons
and Golden Star Dust
metal lust

I am Woman
an emotional
creative Machine

Beautiful without effort
harmonic tunes
blending throughout
the night sky
set off by a lunar lamp
and star struck outer space
oftentimes these tunes
mesmerize me
sending me
to a dream world where
words flow
like sad
symphonies
my heart
plays
slow
melodies
of Ancient Myth
and Futuristic Folklore
within Galaxial imprints
chemically arranging myself in the sky
does it speak of stars sprinkled in cosmic dust
echo whispers of love deep rooted in trust
the epitome of poetry in motion
every word that fell from lips
poured like rain
Weeping water
Sending tears
from the
heavens

Sad sighs
slow tears
run like rivers
from swollen eyes
free flowing
from my heart
the river
of wilderness
a stream of ink
at times forming words
and sometimes
just the patches of ink
blotting iridescent imageries

Mystical magical your gaze
pushin' pen's power to amaze

My scribes
create vibes
it starts with
a snap or pop
however I make
the word drop
onto the page
its all about
the ways to amaze
with my thoughts
that create lines
of context
to leave the reader
wanting to know
what comes next

Words cannot define
the grand design
of my pen
when I write
down one line
the way it
transcends
my very own
techniques
and peak
the interest
of everyone

I morph your mind
beyond the wildest
thoughts of your
very souls being

Leaving you to wonder
while you ponder
what happened
in this girls life
that she performs
open heart surgery
on herself
on stages
in front of people
that will never
understand

My passion to write
is as my passion to love
words ascend from my skin
seeping from my pours

The dream lost its motion
when I lost the devotion
visions became translucent
while reality comes into focus
the sky came crashing
and earth split into
timeless in space
I drift
through
and
through

An
everlasting
emptiness
where
I
have
to
fight
for
every
single
b-r-e-a-t-h

See I'm a desolate voyager
asphyxiating in deep space
with out my soul-mate

By Samantha Campbell

© 2011 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
This is a revised version that I like better; The original poem just felt lacking

Thanks for reading and reviewing

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Ash
This is amazing, I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Brilliantly breathtaking.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Perfectly simple and alluring to the reader, well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Samantha, Samantha, whereever do you get this profound ability to express yourself with such fluidity of metaphors, that fill the mind with actual visions that you create so awesomely with your pen and paper?
You constantly amaze me with your creative talents and abilities to paint visual and emotional pictures with your words.
Thanks you for sharing.
Anne

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Thanks everyone for the reviews .... I have wrote another version of this that I like better Please let me know what you think thanks



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Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is amazing.. That is all I can really say, your poetry is mind blowing x

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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You've penned this perfectly :) xx

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TJ
Samantha the imagery in your work never fails to amaze me. You have a gift.

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Beautiful without effort
harmonic tunes
blending throughout
the night sky
set off by a lunar lamp
and star struck outer space
oftentimes these tunes
mesmerize me


genius!

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This is pretty

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