Introduction

This is the introduction to Armageddon. I will be posting the first chapter shortly after this, within the next few days. Read, and see if you want to stick around for the wait.

Introduction

What if I told you the world you know is fake? That everything you think you know, everything you hate and love is a lie? What if I told you that everything, all the figments of our imagination, from werewolves to aliens existed? In a real world that we are part of, but can’t see? You wouldn't believe me, would you?

Yet it’s all true. We are walking around this world dreaming. An entire world rests just outside our conscience, and once we wake up, we can be part of it. Unlike the majority of people, the majority of humanity, I've woke up, along with a small amount of others. It is crucial to wake up.

For we are not the top of the world as we think. As we sleep, we live stupid, meaningless, deluded, in danger lives. Will the danger go away when we wake up? No. We will be able to face it though, and everything else will not be true. Our eyes will be opened to a supernatural war going on all around us and our ignorant minds will be cleared.

We will stand a chance in this fight rather than being slaughtered before we’re ever awake. Like animals. My name is Isaac Enkidu. This is my story. This is the story of when I woke up.

Author's Note

Just tell me what you think. Also, since this is my newest book, I haven't finished it yet, I'm still writing. I'll probably be writing faster than posting, but in case that's not the case, don't worry, I'll get it to you. You'll eventually see the end of the book, which should be a good enough reward in and of itself for those who stick around the whole way.

Reviews

[Tks]

This reminds me of Oliver Quinn, of which I am a fan. Your introduction was short, sharp, sweet, and intense. Just my type! Hit me up with a read request for the subsequent chapters!
P.S. Hope I get a discount on this exciting book;)

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, I don't know when I'll publish it... probably after my time in the military, but yeah, if we're both still on here after that, I'll get you a discount. XD And I will. :)

[iNSOMniAC]

Whoa. This is a fantastic introduction... I'm not kidding. It grasped my attention, and I'm dying to read more... so please write more!!! xD

Suggestions:

"That everything you think you know, everything you hate and love is a lie? What if I told you that everything, all the figments of our imagination, from werewolves to aliens existed? In a real world that we are part of, but can’t see?" - "That everything you think you know - everything you hate and love - is a lie? What if I told you that everything - all the figments of our imagination, from werewolves to aliens - existed in a real world that we are part of, but can not see?"

"Yet it’s all true. We are walking around this world dreaming. An entire world rests just outside our conscience, and once we wake up, we can be part of it. Unlike the majority of people, the majority of humanity, I've woke up, along with a small amount of others." - "Yet, it’s all true. We are walking around this world, dreaming. An entire world rests just outside our conscience - and once we wake up, we can be part of it. Unlike the majority of people - the majority of humanity - I've woken up, along with a small portion of others."

"As we sleep, we live stupid, meaningless, deluded, in danger lives." - "As we sleep, we live stupid, meaningless, deluded, and endangered lives."

"Our eyes will be opened to a supernatural war going on all around us and our ignorant minds will be cleared." - "Our eyes will be opened to a supernatural war going on all around us, and our ignorant minds will be eternally cleared."

[The StoryTeller]

Oh, wow, I like that, eternally cleared. You know, I really like how you leave in depth comments. I've actually for once got half a mind to send you a read request for all my work. XD But I think that would be bad, and you'd get ticked at me so......

[iNSOMniAC]

No, I'd never be ticked if someone wanted me to look at their writing! As I said before, I love to read your work, and I'd be honored to read every piece that you have. I'll get to it - I promise! :)

[The StoryTeller]

So... lol, I'd be overwhelmed if I saw my inbox with that many read requests (well, I do have that many usually when I get on, just from different people...) Anyways, I'll send you read requests then. :)

[iNSOMniAC]

Thank you! :D

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you for the read requests? Wow, I'm kind of astonished. o: Anyways, if I sent you more than one for a certain writing, just delete the extra ones. And I have one request, if you find a piece very much to your liking, could you send read requests for it to your friends? The more reviews, the better. :) That way I know how I can improve. Just you especially leave such an in detail review. :)

[iNSOMniAC]

Of course! It would be my pleasure. :)) (xD Double-chin smiley faces are great!)

[The StoryTeller]

well......................... :))

[iNSOMniAC]

Yas! *High-fives* xD

[The StoryTeller]

*High-Fives Back* So wait, just to clarify, in your other comment, did you say you're a fan of mine?

[iNSOMniAC]

Of course I'm a fan of yours! :))

[The StoryTeller]

Wow, I don't think I've had one of those before, or if I did, they didn't tell me.

[iNSOMniAC]

Well you have one now! xD

[The StoryTeller]

:p Glad to have a fan and friend. :)

[The StoryTeller]

Sorry, :))

[Meat of Dog]

Being someone who’s into cryptozoology and metaphysics I got all giddy. I wanted to answer “Yes, I would believe you!” Waking up your mind is a good thing. I heard a great quote today that ran something like: There are two ways one can be fooled. The first is to believe what is not true. The second is to refuse believing what is true. You had a nice intriguing cliffhanger at the end there. I like it!

Suggestions:
“That everything you think you know, everything you hate and love is a lie” - “…know, and everything you hate and love, is a lie?”
“In a real world that we are part of, but can’t see?” This is a fragment.
“Yet it’s all true.” – “Yes, it’s all true.”
“deluded, in danger lives” – “… deluded, and dangerous lives.” Or, “deluded, and endangering lives.” (Not sure which you were going for).

[The StoryTeller]

I'm glad you liked it, stay around for the first chapter if you want. It'll be posted either tonight or tomorrow. I'll make some differences in the introduction due to what you said. And I was kind of going for the face that we are in danger in this supernatural war going on all around us in which everything exists and takes a side and we have no idea that it's even going on. Anyways... :p Hope you stick around to keep reading, even if it doesn't turn out how you want. (I don't now how most people want it to turn out so.... XD)

[SheDragon16]

I Like it. It sound's interesting and some what creepy. Looking forward to more.

[The StoryTeller]

It is kind of creepy. If you stick around to continue to read, you'll find some of that out in Chapter One, early on. Just a hint. :p

[Lizardo]

The introduction or prologue keeps the reader to their feet with all of your descriptions of reality.
I'm looking forward on reading this book! :)

[The StoryTeller]

Glad you like the Introduction. On this particular book, I already have Chapter One written. I just need to type it up. I should have it possibly done by this weekend, and also the Second Chapter maybe too.

[Lizardo]

Great! I will be waiting!

[The StoryTeller]

Mmmmm k, it's just taking awhile to type along with school and everything else. XD