Your Life, My Eyes

When you say 'I love you'

I can see right through your lies
Everyone else doesn't see
That you are the devil in disguise
Keep telling your stories
But I won't fall for your demise
Just remember that I won't be here
When all your hope dies
Sometimes you don't get your sympathy
So you sit alone and get high
Funny thing about this problem?
You think freedom is right between your thighs
Everyday I see you around
Talking and rubbing against random guys

I know you see me looking at you
Trying to process your doubtful mind
I see the way you look at the world
Seeing people with life unkind
I know your desires
I know what it is you wish to find
But you sold your soul to the devil
Took his contract and proudly signed
I tried stopping your ultimate downfall
But you disappeared into the sands of time
Am I to blame if I tried?
To make your story into a sad rhyme?
Your sad eyes and pathetic life
Messing around with the hit-it-and-quit-it slim

Reviews

[Jazique]

Perfect on both accounts. First off you are a rhyme time machine and secondly are most of your writings based off of reality because this was flowing with emotions and all. Well done with writing and I've seen so many types so like this and it truly is ashame when they fall so low but, sad for those who have no one trying to catch them. Anyways marvelous job and keep up the astounding writings.

[Revolved]

This is awesome! I love how you said "To make your story into a sad rhyme?"
Awesome!!