Suicide

Suicide

A Poem by Ian Faraway
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Even the heart contemplates it

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There’s just so much pain

Throbbing inside my chest

Almost like a knife went in

And went through the heart

 

My heart brightened

Whenever she showed her face

The sound of her voice making it purr

Regardless of the mockery she showed

 

Unwanted, unloved

Kept by her when she tried to push it away

“It’s not love. It’s a phase.”

She yelled at the saddened heart

 

Hurt became hate

My heart withdrew in shame

Shame of loving her

Shame of the damage she had dealt

 

The dark night

To keep the world blind

The windy sky

To keep the world deaf

 

My heart

My lost, broken friend

Steps to the edge

And thinks of her

 

Shattered and sad

My heart spreads its arms

And throws itself forward

That night it committed suicide

 

Now I’m picking up what’s left

Each piece, another reminder

Of why it happened

And who pushed this innocent heart away

© 2010 Ian Faraway


Author's Note

Ian Faraway
Question of the Poem: How was YOUR Christmas and did you get anything good? :D (just for fun)

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omg, im beginning to fall in love with these poems! youre an excellent writer and i love your unique style. yet another well written poem by the protegy known as Dakota!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


aw man i was hoping to answer a question about the poem!.
christmas was good, got some new shoes about it. lol what abou tyou?
and i liked the poem i had a ex girlfriend who went through a suicide stage so its relating.

Posted 13 Years Ago


good

Posted 13 Years Ago


"The windy sky

To keep the world deaf"

I really liked this line

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2010
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Tags: romance, heartbreak, sad, suicide

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Ian Faraway
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