The Phonebook Chronicles

Today I found my old phonebook

So I decided to take a look

And when I got to the C's, I saw your name

I realized that things were still the same

 

This hell I am put through

is nothing less that hate

the only memory I have of you

is the kiss on our first date

 

But something made me call that number

because of you, I got somehow infected

and my heart stop beating for a moment

when I found out that your number was disconnected

Author's Note

Cute little cheesy poem xD

Reviews

[Abhra]

It is funny and tragic. I don't know what I like more. On one side there is a wistful side which wants to leave everything to imagination ( how it could have been if the number had not been disconnected). The other half wishes it to be a reality. There is a dash of wistfulness which I loved. I really enjoyed reading it. :)

[A. V. Madison]

Thank you. And this actually happened. The story is about a apst love interest, and me finding his number in an old phonebook I had.

[Abhra]

Yes I realize that. What I meant by "reality" was for you being able to connect with him. :)

[A. V. Madison]

Oh ok xD

[A. V. Madison]

It's soooo original, and well said... cheesy? I guess, not, it spoke volumes even through a roaming network or a national, the haunting desire was there. And who cares? if you loved you loved, at least you dared... Amazing.

E.L.

[A. V. Madison]

Thank you very much, Elisa. That means a lot :)

You are a beautiful poet, and person! and thank you too for all the wonderful reviews, so honored to have you around! xo

[A. V. Madison]

Oh Elisa, you're making me blush haha. And the same goes to you, my dear. I'm glad to have YOU around xD

[Stabitha]

It's not cheesy because your rhythm is so precise and your rhymes are original - and that's hard to achieve.

[A. V. Madison]

Thank you :)

[Marie]

Oh....well with an old phonebook this is likely to happen.And this sounds like something someone might actually do.
Look at the second line of your second verse; I think you mean "than" rather than "that".