Reality Has Invaded

Reality Has Invaded
Written: March- 3rd-13
By: Emily Lui


What jerks me out?
 To life when I sleep
What cuts painlessly like a knife when I dream
Tell me well what does
It marks some spot in my Little World

Who dare come onto my turf and wake me vividly
To such bright lights
Floats in my eyes give a freight
 I've yet to catch reality

In my little life
In my Little World
twirling around
there is but one triviality

Yet full of vitality
Although as we all know
my Little World has no purpose to reality

I'd love to keep it that way
 I dream
I forget everything for hours time
Chimes of eight or more won't ring

Any less I've been awoken
Someone or something has
Broken in I've been invaded

Reality has invaded and
Tore a hole into my Little World

Author's Note

This may seem like it was written by a parent to a child...NO, this "Little World" is a place I go to when I sleep.

Reviews

[Mystic_Angel]

I thought it was amazing :D

[Kawaiikitty96]

The first stanza was kind of confusing, but I loved the rest of it! It was fantastic!

[Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy]

cool >_< I'm a bit speechless hehe...
I really love it ^_^

though my interpretation to it is not what's with the parents and child hehe
but with an otaku like me, I sometimes wish my fantasy become my reality.
My room is like my own customize world, with the laptop alone I think i can live life to the fullest hehe... yet there are really times that i need to go out, by then, outside of that world that I had created, is what i think a harsh battlefield that i'm too scared to face, and that's reality haha... lol ^_^

I really love this part:
In my little life
In my Little World
twirling around
there is but one triviality

Yet full of vitality
Although as we all know
my Little World has no purpose to reality

cool ^_^ it's like my little fantasy has no purpose to reality...
I maybe adult physically but I'm a child by heart ^_^

[Time's The Bond]

Yes thank you for the input I agree and I am glad you liked it. I wrote this because I just tend to enjoy the fact that I can get away from my troubles for a while but then once in a while reality invades, and I start dreaming of the reality of what I have to wake up to you know...I'm just like you in ways that I don't exactly act my age. Haha