An Unseen Rhythm

An unseen rhythm running through illegal minds,

Hips swaying to an upbeat life, holding back naught,

Channels flowing full speed, reaching to the end,

Smiles spinning throughout the air within,

Feet never stopping, always moving,

Hearts thumping to the beat of the drum,

Fingers strumming magical air creating tunes,

The rain adding another beat to their songs, 

Rain, wind or stormy hurricane,

Always a beat shining through,

A bystander unable to understand,

A local not caring for a thing,

Sombre tunes not a common tune,

Tears not something often shown,

Smiles thrown around in ease,

Love whipping around the hips of a dancer, 

An unseen rhythm running through illegal minds,

Heads swimming in time to the dropping beat,

Hands waving in the air, caressing roof tops,

Beautiful spells cast upon the cracked cobble stones, 

Losing everything for a moment of bliss, never forgotten,

Casting all aside to be in the magic, lifting praises to all,

Gleams shining in eyes of the dancers, reeling you in,

Channels flowing full speed, taking you along for the ride.

Reviews

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

I cant help but feel a dark undertone in this. Perhaps its the "illegal minds" or the "Losing everything for a moment of bliss" perhaps both or maybe its something else entirely.

regardless I enjoyed this piece.

[Hebe]

Definitely makes you want to forget all your problems for the moment and let the music and dance take you away.... absolutely lovely!

[CBH]

The imagery in this is amazing! I can just picture the whimsy of dancers 'casting their spells' on those cracked cobblestones. It's nice to read something happy for once:)

[WillaDanvers]

Thank you 😁😁