Already Written

 

 

Sitting beneath a crescent moon

watching fireflies frolic amidst

pine needles swaying as

rhythmic motions of light entrance

 

Harmonic whispers of nightfall desires

come as music to my mind,

lyrics afloat on rhyming breezes

in the key of unquestioned love

 

I take pen in hand

as a starlit melody traces

over my thoughts, like a fallen leaf

on a slow lingering stream

 

Though try as I might

on this enchanted evening

where my every dream is you…

I can not write this song

 

For it has already been written,

perfect words in eternal ink

of the deepest devotion

on my heart…by you

Reviews

[Ana B.]

Damn.....every work of yours leaves me in awe. Charmed.

[willweb]

I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. Thank you so much for your kindness Ana B.

[Ana B.]

just being honest...

[Tiana]

So beautifully written, Will ... very heartfelt too ...

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Island Woman

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Will, this is very beautiful, great imagery. Like it very much. :) Rudi

[willweb]

Thank you Rudi for always being so kind.

[Lizardo]

This is such a moving poem... it's really beautiful Will.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Lizardo

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[Afraa]

Damn, this is the deepest poem I have read in a while. How ever did you come up with such a GREAT title? It completely drew me in. The imagery in this piece is absolutely mesmerizing... I feel like even that word is an understatement. You seem like quite the charmer! I have to add this to my favorites.

Beautifully written, willweb.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Afraa. I am thrilled you liked this one. As for the title...it just seemed appropriate.

[Lydia Shutter]

Will, when you write romantic poetry, it is absolutely breathtaking. Soft, graceful, tender....enchanting and charming. Lydi**

[willweb]

Thanks so much Lydi. My muse leads me to these places as I write and it is such a wonderful experience. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much.

[Tania]

wow! Beautiful. Amazing poetry !

[willweb]

Thank you so very much for your kindness.

[ANTO]

Normal pens dont work in the realm of the heart as you found out here Will and what a way to discover that - and here in this perfectly enchanting scene

its not what you do, its the way that YOU do it

an expertly weaved tapestry of love
Bravo

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Anto. Just feeling a bit musical in the heart this morning.

[ANTO]

Wow - a great feeling. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and beautiful words.
"For it has already been written,
perfect words in eternal ink
of the deepest devotion
on my heart…by you"
I liked the poem. Kind thoughts leading to very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kind words today.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed your work today.

[katja]

there's an entrancing, ethereal feel to this one, will...
... you're such an evocative writer that my comments are going to start feeling quiet recycled soon

thank you for sharing
~yekaterina

[willweb]

That's okay miss m. Recycling is a good thing. :) Thanks so much, this was inspired by a poem I read on here yesterday by Ana Sophia.