Can't Trust Me

Can't Trust Me

A Poem by Amy Whetzell
"

relationships, love... its all confusing

"

I know where I messed up

and I need to stop doing it

I try too hard

but giving my all is futile

The truth is

I remember 98% of last night

He doesn't trust me

and he doesn't think I've given him a reason to

I have his love

I have his faithfulness

I have his undivided attention sometimes

What I need I go without

I don't push him to trust me

I rarely bring it up

but it hurts so deep down inside my heart

Can't tell him

I feel unable to talk to him sometimes

"I'm just me"

that's his response to everything when I speak up

© 2008 Amy Whetzell


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Very emotional and well written. You draw your reader into
your feelings and that is as it should be.
It does hurt to not have the trust of one you love, almost as
much as it hurts to trust and have that trust destroyed by
lies and deceit.
A very good write. Thanks for sharing your heart.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This one made me mist up. It hits home more than I can say. Its wonderful and sad. You do a great job of putting your emotions down. Its a talent to move somebody to tears.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 16, 2008

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Amy Whetzell

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