any title ideas?

any title ideas?

A Poem by Amy Whetzell
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My nightsky is no more

filled with dark gray and gloom

what is this world I'm in now?

what is this life within this room?

 

Soulmates

once in a lifetime lovers

how'd we go from good to worst

air without you only smothers

 

I feel like I'm drowning

in a vast black abyss

For as my nightsky is no more

something is greatly amiss

 

Where are your stars

you placed in my eyes

Where's the deep blue sky blanket

you wrapped me into safely all nights

 

Where'd you put that electrical smile

that sends lightning bolts thru my heart

Where has our thunderous passion gone to

you allow clouds and gloom to keep us apart

 

 

Come back to me my nightsky

make me feel whole again

Come back to me my lover

better to me than when it all began

 

Change your clouds into clear

let go of the rain

Please end my suffering

and let me ease your pain

 

Can you still feel heat on your skin

Do you miss your ray of sun

Night and Day have something special

if you won't change we've wasted what we've begun

 

You are the night to my day

Here in the 13th hour, we walk or rebuild

Join me in eternal biss

love and passion in our hearts be refilled

 

Or stay just as you are now

miserable and alone

no happiness to be had

your sweet family's love be gone!

© 2011 Amy Whetzell




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I have an idea for the title how about Weatherly Emotions.???? Let me know what you think

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Tags: love, pain, love lost, black abyss

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Amy Whetzell

Garner, NC



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