Seasons of Marriage

In spring worlds of joy and merryment

do I propose to you

with a hope of a new begginning

like this season.

 

May you enjoy the summers

under this old tree

of old memories and shade.

 

As autumn plummets into your days

let their be wonder and amusement

on this dear face

of yours.

 

Eternity shall hold your winter cold hand

with comfort just as I hold

at this moment.

 

So I do hope you a fullfilled life

on this day and forever after.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[nono]

Pure beauty! Though I so don't ever plan on getting married! I love this though it's beautiful you did a nice job writing this! I like it a cute peaceful writing! And the picture breath taking!

[manifesto]

short but sweet, love it :D
p.s. stanza 3, line 2, typo: it's "there" not "their"

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Beautiful poem :)

[Lachenille Papillion]

Peaceful adoration...

[~Lizzy♬]

I loved the way you used the season of spring into your poem. That made it have real imagery and life coming from this poem. The words were fluent and very descriptive. Keep writing or I will come find you and demand for more poems. ;)

[Aven]

I loved this! lovely use of the seasons.

[kuru]

wow that was very poetic nice flow...keep it up!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

tranquil~beautiful~ such noble care~ =)~

[Lylith Moonflower]

Very beautiful poem. The words flowed well and the message was wonderful. I enjoyed it's read alot.

[Moonflower]

This was quite lovely, nice imagery. I liked it. :)