~ O' Mar

~ O' Mar

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~ One of my recurring visions, I have since I was a girl of 16, and one who always follows me.

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~ O' Mar

 

 

 

It happened again, I wandered back

On my Portuguese coast, where I

Every two months have a richly

Returning vision as I walk

In my white cotton robe

Which hits the seabed

And where the shells kiss my feet

 

This time you ran there again,

With your white linen trousers, and your bare

Upper body, again your face was not visible

Your presence always as highly with your

Telepathic hugs, the distance became shorter

Of time, and slow motion, all running towards me

 

The ever eternal recurring dream

Your wonderful blank face,

But the love around your corpo

That speaks volumes, and hits me

To the depths of my soul.

 

The mystery has never consummated

Higher volts, and can’t be disclosed

By coating only dreams

How gold and sweet they can be,

Reality is a waterway of the future

 

And with lost days and romantic visions

I often turn back, like it embraces me

When the mind is finally rested, it searches me,

Because I saw that man, with his

Headless body glisten in imagination,

And he saw me…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

~ This is a write about a rich vision, and mystery I have since I was 16, and it always turns back on me once or twice within two months.... It is never solved... it has a huge elusive meaning to me. (It is also the second write on this vision I wrote).

The music is of one of my favorite Fado singers, in duet originally... as the ancient song always haunts the vision I have. Just if you have the need, click on the music add... ; )



Thank you xx

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We dream what the mind nudges but not always what the heart needs. Time ticks back and forth in dreams, and, we sleepers and dreamers try to chase it - sometimes it stays still long enough for us to see right through and understand, But other times it swings like a jewel on a golden chain, teasing.. taunting .. like your headless man .. the one waiting for a title, a name, eyes with which to gaze into yours.

Your writing varies in theme so often, you have such vibrant imagination .. tis all powerful in its own way, hard to say, thank you and instantly leave!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Beautifully expressed dearest x thank you for your words... P.s.mailed you hugs x



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The piece put me in an abstruseness state.
I love the mystery that the man in your vision is giving you,
and now me as you shared this with us.
It is so romantic to think that he might be a soulmate--

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your support, and words dear one. It is my fate in time... lost time, past time, and p.. read more
The dream is indeed a mystery...and to dream it over and over, through the years, is a mystery in itself. I often find that after awhile the dream will reveal its meaning. Hopefully you will get to the core of the underlying message, subconsciously or not, there must be a reason for this to continue to haunt you. This is a dark romantic piece that is beautifully penned.... I have chills!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

IT IS SO BORING!!! never want to be like that, then rather crazy. :) lol
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

You don't have to worry about that Sis! If anything, you are unique... a sparkling gem. :)

11 Years Ago

So are you love!!!! ♥
I hope your days will be filled with romantic visions... For what is this life without our vision that takes us to wonderful places and dreams that awaken us in lovers arms... I hope that mystery will be consummated and you will have have that clearer vision after that coated dreams ... The song and singer also is awesome so does this write...
Thank you for sharing...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Sami. A song by: " Dulce Pontes & Amália Rodrigues" Portugese Fado singers. (the.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Hope it will be solved... Smiling....

11 Years Ago

I hope that secretly too, but you should tell that stubborn "Eli" LOL (just a Dutch Joke)
This is a beautiful romantic dream. It makes me think that there was a time when it was real and your mind keeps searching for that person again in astral means.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Exactly, it's a part of us, of you, of me... I embrace it as an extra feeler, and try to not see it .. read more
Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

me either

11 Years Ago

:-)

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