~ I just freeze slowly

E.L. Poetry, Elisa Laura, Love, Hurt, Lost, Sad, Pain, Truth, Heartfelt, Dying, Death, Gone

~ I just freeze slowly

In love’s breath

Where I’m lost

And will not find

My key nor 

Silver lines to see

 

I just freeze slowly

Of hurt, and lost

Interwoven

In my eternity

 

The moon is cold

She can’t shine no more

For days from now on

As she misses her love

 

The sea is wild to give a sign

On tides not in equality

Where sand is raw

And dark within denials reality

 

I will be eclipsed forever soon

As I’ve spoken my heart

I can’t go on shining

While I’m inner dying

 

The Universe is changing

And sings different notes

For what she felt within the signs

Where pure clairvoyance floats

 

And it’s no choice it’s a fact

A heart reasons dialect

The time for me has come

I will be moving on

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

I played this tonight....
XxXx

Reviews

[Kenaz]

I'm sorry for your loss, but I am glad that you have come back (at least further) out of the moonlight. Though you undoubtedly learned some truths out there in the darkness. I felt a stillness and cold come over my heart reading this. It really hit me hard when you said that you couldn't see the silver lining. Really really fantastic this one, and I am glad that we have some similarities in our music. I hope that things have gotten better from this low point!

Thank you T. for this amazing review, (didn't expect it) the better it salutes me in my early morning.... :) You're really kind, things have gone way better, through the last year.... at least, like I told you, I don't want to see myself there ;) (((HUGS)))

[Cryingkate]

I am Listening... I am watching...... I am waiting...... connected

That's really kind, but you dont have to do anything for me, I'm on myself and strong, I will choose to ask people for help when thats my disicion. You don't have to answer everyone on here for me, while I'm answered them already myself, you are you. And I'm me. Connected yes, but let it be on a healthy way please....

[Cryingkate]

Thank you for showing me where I can do better.....
Thank you for the lesson...

[Cryingkate]

I was moved with compassion for the compassion others were feeling and I wanted to thank them and let them know their their compassion was noticed, perhaps I should of done this privately.
I was not answering for you.
At a time like this we need to be extra sensitive and don't take chances or to choose to love with all your heart. I choose to love.
I am sorry that my actions hurt you.
You come to share your grief then say I'll shall deal with it on my own.
Peace be with you.

I can understand, and everyone is here to share his/her art, pain grief, belief, whatever on his/her own way, I'm dealing with each and every anew feeling honestly which cross my path, and i guess it's very healty to do it that way, Your actions didn't hurt me Kate, I'm just honest, too much love can suffocate a free Dutch minded person. Wich doesn't mean I choose love too, but it need to be breateble love, for love is letting free now and then. I didn't want to harm you in any way, for you have been great to me, but I need some time and peace alone. I will come out stronger, Be good, and peace with you too xx

[Cryingkate]

I am not hurt .. your Soul and Heart is and always will be Nothing but Love to me. The same honesty I commend you for I respect and understand.
By you sharing your lessons I am learning things deep inside the Soul from you.You are teaching how to deal with pain while you learn yourself.
All One! I speak like never before and now my heart has a voice and a voice to speak truth. You gave me that knowledge and gift. I am using it. And never felt more free. Thank you for not being hurt. Thank you for truth. I will not hide or run when you speak truth. But I want to be ever so respectful. You have touched my life forever. I can see deeper and clearer About Pain. Thanks to you
I needed you more then U need to to walk thru the valley of pain to understand it.This I see xoxoxox

Thank you sweets for loving free... for let me breath, you mean the world to me, for doing that... without being mad as others... you're so rich, wise, and a soul who is there to learn, as I'm not perfect myself either, not at all... but like this we grow... I'm grateful to you. xx

[Raven Starhawk]

Something like this influences me. The words...your skill to pen something so wonderful and touched with emotion...it is a window and I am looking in. I can see everything as though I am living through it. Anyways great as always.

Thank you very much my friend, I have made a choice tonight, and I will... X

[SkinlessFrank]

what choice do we have but to move on?

Right... feeling dead made me reborn in the couple of days...
Hope all is well with her ;)

[SkinlessFrank]

Thanks Eli....one more treatment to go...and then we celebrate life

My prayers are with you all.... in my heart you are! hugs from over sea

I can speak for myself sweet Kate.

[Cryingkate]

I only spoke for myself too . your pain has crossed my path and now I have pain to deal with. I am moved with so much Love and compassion from this pain you brought cross my path and am dealing with it the best way I know how for me.
You have taught me lessons and one is to stand uo for my own heart. There is so much truth in all you say. I am learning from you and so I stand up for my pain and my heart with gratitude for you. You are inspirational and thru your pain I see a more beautiful way to deal with pain.
Thank you, but out of respect I will not speak here again. Unless you choose to want me to.

You may always be around Kate, I hope we always can say things honestly, without shame. :) be good dear one.