~ She

E.L. Elisa Laura, Poetry, Song, Lyrics, Children, Love, Happiness

 

~ She

 

 

She…

She is the sun and the moon in me,

She is the dream that could ever be

The dream world of lost glorious times

Just to live… she….

She is just

The purity of the tender soul

A humbling creation inside every one

She want you to see… just pure beauty

Yes, that is she

 

She…

She is the sparkle of love in me

The little one that is hiding to be

The time passes by but she….

She is always there when I need to be,

Loves me back just that tenderly

When it’s too late to be she,

She will always remind me of

The love for new days, yes

That is she...

 

So is she…

The only true one that can make me smile

The most precious soul of the universe,

Nothing will ever be sad… as long as

She…

She still dances the rumba inside of me

 Laughs at the people who need to be

Happy in love, and not feel that free

And to all who are sad,

She...

She wants you to be stronger

Than you’d ever be, she wants you

Healthy in each moment,

Even when you’re ill, she is always there

So is she…

She… she is

The most valuable one I ever seen,

The most tiny sweet love of me

I know her so well

As my heart beats the same,

So is hers…

              So is hers…

 

She, she is one soul to accumulate

One heart in my body to see

That is she...

 

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

A little song to those little ones ;-)
As I do love children so much!
Enjoy

Elisa

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this, Elisa.

i look at this from another angle...i feel as if my poems are my children...and the she in this poem, for me, is the muse...

she never lets me down...she is the one relationship i have sustained in the last 40 plus years, even though all of my others have come and gone.

this perfectly depicts that for me.

thank you for this

jacob

Thank you so much jacob, I'm happy my poem / little song could bring you there.

[Emerald Seas]

Stunning and beautiful, Elisa. I read this as a mother of a wonderful little girl (ha, she's 17 now) - but I also read it as a tribute to the little girl in all of us, ladies. The spirit of youth and freedom, willingness to love and give that comes from that little girl so, so long ago.
Wonderful writing, my friend! 100

Thank you very much dear friend, beautiful that it brought you memories, and thoughts :)

[CS]

To all the little "she's" of the world...and their unfailing kindness and love. I agree, this could be taken as about inner child or about the precious little ones. I always admire that about your work, that it can be interpreted into something intimate for each person. This is just so sweet and so strong at the same time, Eli. Very nice work, my friend.

Thank you Court for your sweet and beautiful thoughts. :)

[quinfinn]

beautiful...you did the impossible with this write. gave me those paternal pangs, and i have never had children of my own. well done.

Thank you so much Quin! I'm happy you did felt it sweet friend.

[Quill~]

This Lullaby brings me happiness. I love the positive note you bring to the girls. You are a wonderful role model, and I admire that. I admire your self-confidence as well. Excellent!

Aw thank you dear Quill, I'm so happy you enjoyed and it gave you happiness, that was my intention with the poem. For all the children, with us, and in us.... :)

[Quill~]

:) I think you have accomplished that, and more. So lovely.

Makes me more than happy sweetheart. :)

[Quill~]

:)

[Ed Hart]

the little boy in me calls out to you, can elly come out and play...lovely and touching

Thank you Ed, I will ask her :) but I see she is jumping already so I think that is a big "YES" :)

[David Scott]

I could hear a mother sing this to her baby girl...
Lovely.

Thank you with my heart beats my friend... bum bum bum :) always nice to have you by!

[Horizon K.]

As a mother I absolutely connect with this. My child is my soulmate like no one else could ever be, pure, unconditional, immeasurable love. It's a beautiful thing and your beautiful poem so perfectly captures this feeling. Loved it Elisa:)
Horizon

Thank you with whole my heart dear one... your words mean the world to me! xx

[Frieda P]

This is such loveliness, I read it like a soft lullaby. I wasn't sure if you were talking about an actual little 'she' or the wee she inside of yourself. It works either way, we all have a child inside of us that loves us no matter what...music to my ears tonight, exactly what I needed. Thanks for this Eli.

Thank you so much lovely Frieda for your wonderful thoughts, on my poem honey. xx

[Poetic Beauty]

This is stunningly beautiful. Each line adds to the next and it creates a peaceful happy feeling. A true emotion of love is felt in this piece and dances with each new word.

Thank you my soul sister... I am honored by your words :)

[Poetic Beauty]

you are welcome. Children have a special place on this earth. They are innocent and create laughter even when there is sorrow.

Exactly, they are so pure.... and innocent.