~ Amor II

~ Amor secondo, E.L. Elisa Laura, Poetry, love,

 

 

~ Amor II

 

 

Real love doesn’t ask for much

It dwells on the perfect skies,

It embraces the richer shores

It has golden treads lighter than speed

 

For me it is a thing I always had,

I lost it, but found it back again,

I saw it sparkling against the streams

And it whispered my ambience

 

Love is something to hold on strong;

Among the different changing spaces

The waves of natural kindred flows,

And in the daily eyes of people’s faces

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

This is a write I did when I was with my love in Andalucia lately. The sky was filled with ozon, as it could thunder every minute... it brought me thoughts, as I wrote them, as in life thunders can be there, but after rain you know what will come~
And I hope you enjoy it :) always do what you must :)

P.s. the title " ~ Amor II means the second write about "Amor I wrote, the other one is still onder construction, but it will be here in no time....as the (same title I used...) "
as Amor is Spanish for Love.

E.L.

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

"Love is something to hold on strong" Yes indeed, yet so many people make the mistake of holding too strong, crushing and breaking what they cherish the most, so sad... Love the positive energy that emerges from this piece, it breathes on large spaces, the skies, the shores... devastating to lose love, but invigorating to find "it back again". You have a smart philosophy on your subject, beautiful writing once again!

Oooh thank you so much sithlordjp :D so good to have your thoughts by always.

This one I wrote lately in mi Espana :)
Elisa

[Quill~]

I love the romantic flow of words...it is like a dream to me. "Love"...the word is more, when described this way. You are amazing.

Aw thank you so much Quill, :) for reading me...

[Quill~]

I'm glad to read your work..just wow!

:-) X

[Quill~]

:)

[h d e rushin]

I just love the Spanish guitar music..And your lovely words an apt
accompaniment....thanks for sharing this, dana

Thank you dear one....

[MOON]

Beautiful love is in the simple things in the beauty that surrounds in the people that give it meaning. Lovely as usual

Yes, dear Moon, thank you so much for feeling this one :) hugs!

[Clockwork]

Your old soul is showing in this one. This is the love of infinity and light. It is the kind that flows through all things without selfishness. It wells up inside those who engage in romance and make a real soul connection.

You remind us of those elements in these lines:

The waves of natural kindred flows,
And in the daily eyes of people’s faces

Yes, when I walk in the ancient land of hope, and amor, I see the daily wrinkels on old people, as each one has a story, a lifetime, a love once had, or a person who left... a real life within a beautiful face (just on the street).... thank you dear poet, for your music always xx

[Clockwork]

You are very welcome :-) and thank you for helping to bring pieces of the great mystery into words.

:-) makes me smile... can't wait to read more of you dear poet!

[Antonio Valentino]

waww.. even the picture looks like you..

did i ever tell you, you have a pretty soul?

your spirit simply exudes such warmth and kindness

and its just cute as a button too

and i dont mean that in a physical sense, but in the ways that the ocean mirrors the sky, and the river hugs the land, until valleys are carved, under a sky that sees blue..

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Your words are a poetic ambience on wich we in spain could write music on.... lovely! thank you for being you x

[Antonio Valentino]

awww i brought you back from behind the white.... :)

i came to say goodbye, and saw this..

but you are the one, who made my fingers do the rest..

you too.. always xo

I have the same yearning for poets, with really good writes like yours :D sleep is less important than reading art, real art never sleep they say ;-) I think that has some truth, as it is connected~

[Antonio Valentino]

Happy New Yearn, to us both..

:)

:-)