~ Transfixed

~ Transfixed, Elisa Laura, E.L. Mind Scribbles, Animals, Humans, Hunger, Love, Need? Perception, Philosophy

~ Transfixed

 

 

When two souls are resting,

Transfixed, and eyed,

Intrigued by their primal instincts

With nothing to hide,

Why there is this fate?

Of transparent protection

When they have a nice date?

 

Now the question is;

“Could the bird know

That the glass would protect him”?

“And would the cat know,

He could not catch the bird”?

Or were they too mesmerized by each other?

And did not even thought

Of any human perceptions

Nor even of anyone to hurt?

 

Blockades of life, on the path of lust

Similarly, and  also in the animal world,

Not reaching really one another

And while the one and only beasts,

Made sand into glass,

And of trees some wood

For these two just rested nothing less

Than observation, instead of food...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Just another scribble of my mind.... ;-)
Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Tree]

You and Belle have good taste in music. As with your poetry they tend to illuminate and open a door in the mind. In regards to this poem you raise an interesting question. I think even the simplest of creatures are curious. And that the cat's curiosity overrides his instinct to kill here. Even if there were no glass. But maybe it is just what I want to believe :)

Thank you Bro, for this review, I guess you're right on that point, but we never know indeed how the cat shall react... this was beautiful :) Elisa

[KAREN]

You bring such beatuy into your writing. Your words come to life, and I can see the awesome poetic picture you have painted.

I thank you my fellow poetess... grateful to you always x

[KAREN]

You're welcome!

[Renée]

Love your thoughts ...all the questions... funny how all creatures are drawn to seek for whatever reason each other....
such a precious photo

Thank you very much Renée, yes, I was Transfixed, Mesmerised by this photo... it brings many thoughts, :) xo

[Renée]

I agree ! ( : xo

[Androglossia]

Relationship with only lust does not feed the soul. A write full of thoughts, dear Eli. Thank you for sharing.

So sharp my dear.... :) as always, when you enter, my day is perfect! xo thank you!

[Androglossia]

As you are next to perfection:)

Muwah xxx so are you!

[Joe]

Lovely Thought Play Eli!

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Hi Gabe, thank you so much... :) I'm glad you enjoyed this I will be back for your beautiful writes...