~ Magic

~ Magic

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~ Magic, E.L. Elisa Laura, Love, Beach, Home, With You, There...

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~ Magic


 

When the day makes love,

     To the night, for the last time;

There you can see the Magic,

     Like a perfect poetic line

 

Love  flew, like colorful pieces,

     Around your reflective being

Eyes who catch the message always;

     Are wise above the time they're seeing

 

No, rush, no lust, no wonder,

     Just embracing the nothingness of here,

Pure with the air we’re breathing,

     And love grows without any fear

 

To not want to touch it,

     Is the magic of all due time;

Be surrounded by it, is purity

     For shivers thrill down your spine

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

Thank you for reading...
A poem from out of my hiatus
Feel free ;)

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the feeling of your poem is immense, and so wide variety! It`s wonderful to capture magic in all moments of love, in intimacy of nature and time...All your verses radiate purity and clarity of emotions...My favorite lines:
No, rush, no lust, no wonder,
Just embracing the nothingness of here,
Pure with the air we’re breathing,
And love grows without any fear

wonderful piece!
{nia}

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you dearest for picking out the lines you love the most, always happy when you are here.



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~'you can do magic'-awesome-shivering down my 'bionic' spine-you know-
i really like the rhyme-these lines...'there you can see the magic, like a
perfect poetic line'~and i love that song!!!~ ;-P

J

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Like to be or not to be? :P Hidden Beatle lover :P
wunder

9 Years Ago

~yes!!!-everything is turning and spinning-suddenly~ :D

9 Years Ago

Haha Volks Wagen, The Beatles, Music, I knew you got it... ;D
you're so intense with the mending of nature in the enrapture of unveiling your spirit in a clustered accommodations to reach for stars, within the rhythm of time left...great piece

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you humbly my dear friend, I so appreciate your way of thinking...
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Much here to Love Elisa---but what a way to end--not wanting to touch it for fear of breaking its fragile Beauty-but hold it pure and dear for all eternal--very much I sigh to this Beautiful Ink

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you fine friend, for I'm sighing with you lol, for it's a gasp of elusiveness all the way, in .. read more
I like how you start with how the magic will come to be, and then show us how it is in all of its glory on the last stanza of this one. And that last stanza really just shows us how to let love naturally take its course instead of forcing it into existence. I think that is a really good message. I like these magical love poems from you. They have a very summer vibe to them, one that I miss very much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much my friend, for saying that. There is a lot of them, into my catalog, these were .. read more
This poem speaks volume to me. It depicts the feeling of being deeply overwhelmed in mind or emotion which ushers a person into absolute contentment. I loved the third stanza and you know very well why:) I think it is the heart of the piece. This is 10/10.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you sister, x you always feel me, yes we both know why... :) talk soon... until then xx
Mary Ann M.

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome:) take your time!
Eli this is so eloquently written, with beautiful imagery. One of my new favorites.

“When the day makes love,
To the night, for the last time;
There you can see the Magic,
Like a perfect poetic line"

This is a perfect poetic line! You express the magic in day and night, words full of love, as we embrace the purity in your captivating words.

“No, rush, no lust, no wonder,
Just embracing the nothingness of here,
Pure with the air we’re breathing,
And love grows without any fear”

Magic is captured in your words, “And love grows without any fear”, simply brilliant, my favorite line.

Magic if found in real love, pleasure in the simplest of things, like a day at the beach savoring the essence of all things.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Traci dear, thank you so much for digging deeper into this one. You're the best, so pleased you enjo.. read more
the feeling of your poem is immense, and so wide variety! It`s wonderful to capture magic in all moments of love, in intimacy of nature and time...All your verses radiate purity and clarity of emotions...My favorite lines:
No, rush, no lust, no wonder,
Just embracing the nothingness of here,
Pure with the air we’re breathing,
And love grows without any fear

wonderful piece!
{nia}

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you dearest for picking out the lines you love the most, always happy when you are here.
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Pax
First stanza ~
Reminds me of the summer time on the beach reaching for the one you love in one full embrace in poetic ambience of warmth and beauty.

Second stanza ~
Oh I can relate to it too well… Love indeed has many shades of color.. in your reflective being you’ll see the you, the wiser you and the stronger you that keeps you battle life’s challenges… love this line: “Eyes who catch the message always; Are wise above the time they're seeing”

Third Stanza ~
Oh how love grows without fear… that is simple brilliant.. you’re a wise one big sis… truly… in your words I see reality we live in of today…

Last stanza ~
I see magic shows itself when you least expected it… the purity of magic is how you let miracles come in into your life… with open arms...

Brilliant work big sis!



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm happy to see what you write about this! xx
Pax

9 Years Ago

your most welcome, you write beautifully big sis... hugs!

9 Years Ago

Thanks again lovely brother, I will catch up on more of yours, as soon as you're feeling well xx
A very nice photo. A cold beer, the beach and no place to go. One of best days of a life.
"No, rush, no lust, no wonder,
Just embracing the nothingness of here,"
Good to know peace and real pleasure. Real pleasure shouldn't be work. Should be free and easy. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend, for you get it so well.... ;) makes me smile. Real love, and pleasure sho.. read more

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