~ Paris with Him

~ Un véritable voyage avec lui...

~ Paris with Him

 

I felt obvious a lady how he treated me

When I walked with him on the Champs-Élysées

The colors of the crowd were neutral,

But our love yet so hungry like the smell of fresh coffee

And the fresh baked  croissants across the street corners

It made our love more than vividly alive...

 

A glimpse of some street artists,

And accordion players with their delightful music

Made me relive the days of the past

I felt the romance in it’s pure forms, that night

As the cars drove too fast as we missed their slightly sight

Standing there with you underneath the Arc de Triomphe

 

Feeling your arms around me and your wondeful eyes,

Your dark hair as always dances in the wind

And your glimpse of love is the hottest of mankind

I can drown in the arms that are you filled with trust

The way you fulfill me is like a thousand summers long

The gift of handle my freedom, is rich in you my man, a must

 ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Just click, for some " atmosphère"

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Empirik]

This is smoothly breathtaking! I felt it's every word together in splendid form and perfect structure, telling such a rich story of two in a moment to last forever. It left me a little speechless and comforted in a gasping physical moment wrapped up in a love that fully satisfies the soul. Lovely! This has me in air. X :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

so romantic, anyone would envy the woman who is hugging her beloved in the charming streets of Paris! Pure romance :) the one who inspires you is really lucky!

It was with my hubbie, underneeth my profile. We have travelled so much... in 12 years thank you deeply :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I`m so happy for you! wish you to travel more in places you always wanted ,that is my dream too :) nothing is impossible!

Indeed... we plan a longer one for next years, Egypt maybe just in the beginning of the year, and to Asia in november, but it can be also South America. I want to see the whole world... :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh, may God bless you to go everywhere together!

I hope that too... life is short. And we need to take all out of it. I wish the same for you, if you're in the North here one day, give me a call ;)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

i`ll be so happy, if i can travel one day! and I`ll visit your country for sure!

Would be so great, then you can see here so many tulips of your dreams... :) I will be your guide :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

may God make this dream come true!

[Sam]

Wonderful poem, I love it :)

Thank you... You shall be there with her one day ;)

[Sam]

We've gone to paris, last year- wonderful trip, it was insane coming home though o.e

Oh I thought you where there only with your uncle, well amazing then!!! keep the vibe alive :D

[Sam]

Nahh, I've been to paris a few times. I went with my girlfriend last year, and I went with my uncle this year, I really wanna go to Japan...And find godzilla.

[zainul]

Amazing degree of trust in a man may or may not remain in the future.
But,you are happy with the present and feel safe in his arms.
Thanks for the confidence in love that has been expressed in your lovely poem.
I enjoyed the following two verses very meaningful
"And your glimpse of love is the hottest of mankind

I can drown in the arms that are you filled with trust"

[Southern Cross]

What a lovely side trip you have given me.. France, music and poetry..the smell of a baguette and french coffee. It can't get better than this..very Romantic words and the emotions they bring to life..Thank you

[light and ashes]

This is so beautiful and romantic. I love the picture that you created with your words. I could smell the fresh croissants and hear the accordion playing :)

[emmajoy]

Yes, there's something about Paris: the smell of coffee and fresh croissants and those wicked French cigarettes, clinking glasses, the noise of politics and the hooting of traffic and .. and .. tis a wonderful city! And as for the romance, your romance, what a memory, Elisa .. what tickling of the senses, and, more importantly, the memories about someone who really cared .. 'I can drown in the arms that are you filled with trust ' Somehow i think you loved writing this poem, perhaps warmed your heart just a little more. Une poeme superbe!

[johnnyqueer]

J'adore this beautiful poem! I connect love with the beauty of France as well. Gorgeous poem!
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[EMF]

A beautiful poem about a beautiful subject. Marvelous imagry and striking theme. Really well handled and a delight to read