Shades of Light

Shades of Light

A Poem by Hannah Jocks
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Okay, this poem makes no sense! And i suck at poems. So laugh, critisize, but please HELP!! I want to get better at poems...

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Shades of Light set me free

When Darkness overcame me

I was never alone

Though I thought I was a clone


Was it true?

Was I born blue?

I always though so

I always thought so low


My mind was glazed with thoughts of darkness

Also thought “HE” was holiness

Then I found it was science

and we had to form an allience


Shades of Light set me free...

© 2012 Hannah Jocks


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I enjoyed this. Although I was quite confused when I got here: Was it true?

Was I born blue?

I always though so

I always thought so low


My mind was glazed with thoughts of darkness

Also thought “HE” was holiness

Then I found it was science

and we had to form an allience


Shades of Light set me free...
-Please explain what that means if you can. Still, great!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah Jocks

6 Years Ago

Lol, i'm not sure what it means either. I just wrote random things that rymed!! I guess I meant... I.. read more
Hannah Jocks

6 Years Ago

and the first part has to do with, like posatives set her free from slavery, she thought she was a c.. read more
Hannah Jocks

6 Years Ago

I guess I meant something. But leaving it for veiwer to give their own thoughts on what its about.



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I enjoyed this. Although I was quite confused when I got here: Was it true?

Was I born blue?

I always though so

I always thought so low


My mind was glazed with thoughts of darkness

Also thought “HE” was holiness

Then I found it was science

and we had to form an allience


Shades of Light set me free...
-Please explain what that means if you can. Still, great!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah Jocks

6 Years Ago

Lol, i'm not sure what it means either. I just wrote random things that rymed!! I guess I meant... I.. read more
Hannah Jocks

6 Years Ago

and the first part has to do with, like posatives set her free from slavery, she thought she was a c.. read more
Hannah Jocks

6 Years Ago

I guess I meant something. But leaving it for veiwer to give their own thoughts on what its about.

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Hannah Jocks
Hannah Jocks

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K, My name is Hannah I'm 14 and I love to write mostly stories, books, and scripts but I am working on getting better with poetry. My favorite genres are Mystery, thriller, adventure and I LOVE twi.. more..

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