PLEASE STAY STRONG!<3

PLEASE STAY STRONG!<3

A Poem by victoria

you simply deserve one simple gift,
to let the world go your way for once,
to feel what its like to be right,
and to feel nothing of being wrong.
You have had so many troubles 
and the world is harsh on some,
but at least you have loved ones,
when some people have none,
darling, you are my best friend,
and sometimes god takes peoples lifes,
but think of it this way,
if he goes, and leaves on this simple night,
he will feel no pain and suffer from only the light.
your grandfather has lived his life,
hes staying strong for you.
if you give up on him,
he'll surely give up too.
so do us all a favor,
be brave for one more year,
i promise once things get to the worst,
they will get better more, 
so dont have fear.
i know everyone is leaving, 
and family is seporating,
but everythings going to be okay,
life is gonna work out to be simply amazing.
the other day you almost gave up,
and i was scared i'd wake up alone,
with out a best friend, 
whom i'd call my own.
i know im sounding selfish ,
but darling please dont go,
because sometimes all i need,
is for you to push me so.
so maybe if i push you,
and get through these harsh times,
you may see that life will work out,
and it'll all end up just fine.
But every night i go to sleep,
to awaken with fear that you wont be there,
you are my sister,
you are full of life.
sometimes all you need to move on,
is a little light,
so block out all the bad, 
and look at all the good,
pray for answers,
and maybe in return,
everything will work out 
and the pain will be a blur.
so hold on just a little longer,
i know that you are brave,
but be strong, take the pain,
because someday,
this will all be silly dream.
~i love you....just hold on, and be brave~

© 2012 victoria


Author's Note

victoria
this is for my best friend, who is going through some hard times in life. People are growing ill and family is falling apart at times, i know some of you will be able to relate, so please comment your thoughts and feelings about this piece. EnJoY! and thank you!<3

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CJ
I don't even know you, nor have I ever read any of your works, but you truly touched me with this piece. Life is rough for me, and even though I wasn't the intended audience, it did give me a spark to keep going and to try to push past because I know I must have someone who feels like this for me. Your friend is very lucky to have you. Great writing.
And thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Great work...
Keep that up :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh...my gosh...words can't discribe how i love this
it's so beutiful and emotional
thank you for sending me an RR


Posted 12 Years Ago


You're A Great Friend .. Your Friend Is Lucky For Having Someone To Describe Her Feelings In Her Place N Feel Her Pain Keep Going N Plz Read My Writings Too N Comment ..May Your Friend Find Happiness And May Everything go Easier For Her She's Strong For Having You ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


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*gasps* oh my god oh my god!!! this was b-e-a-u-tiful!!! awww uh! gotta wipe the tear :') wow so beautifully written with pure soul in every line. OH MY GOD!!! I CAN'T DESCRIBE ITS BEAUTY!!! XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I am sorry that you're best friend is having a rough time in life, but I will pray for him/her. :) I love the emotions poured into the beauty and dynamic poem. Wonderful piece.

~Lizzy~

Posted 12 Years Ago


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