Anna

The beginning of a Human life with some options.

Anna

Go on Earth, daughter.

Take care of what I did. 

My creation. 

And be careful of familly.

Familly is the most dangerous betrayer.

I woke up next to my brother but I couldn't move. My wings were too eavy on this ground, what is this ? This smell. The smell of blood. Where am I ? My body felt weird and very heavy. I opened my eyes and I saw my brother, just next to me, laying down the floor, the bloody dirt. What is all this blood ? Where came it from ? I started moving a bit and realized it was not ours. Putting my hand on the ground, pushing my body up, my wings just falling down my body like inanimate. Getting up, and starting waching what is going on here. I saw the body of a man, a stranger, maybe an human. My long white wings were starting moving at their owns. The body were sinking in a large river of blood, maybe his. My brother woke up, staring at me like he is seeing a ghost and he starts smiling like an idiot, waking up from a big drunk night.

- Heeeey little angel... Am I dead ?
- Idiot... YOU are an Angel. 
- Aaah..., I saw that he is starting thinking of, you're right... I am...

I sigh loudly and stare at the corpse. Did I do that ? Did he ? Did... we ? Stretching my wings like I just woke up of a long night and sigh another time.

- Did you see the corpse ?
- Yaaah...
- Did we do that ?
- Nuuu... Maybe ?

I look at him, prepared to punch him in the face to put him in a good sleep mode but the corpse starts moving and I just freeking out, make three steps back.

- Micheal... Get back

The Human gets up and sees all the blood, scared like a child.

- OH MY GOD ! WHAT IS ALL THIS BLOOD ?!

I was trying to hide my wings but the man were to excited and screamed as an animal. I put my fingers in my hears, were too sensitive to squeaky heavy scream.

- Father, please, stop screaming ! 

My brother gets up next to me, sensitive at the gravity, laughing for no reasons. I just thinking how to tell him, explain to him. But the guy just screams out and runs away. I sigh and watch my brother.

- Please, explain me what is all this blood.
- I think mommy just had her period when we came at..., my hand were directly in his face
- B*****d, just shut up and think !

- Okay... I was just trying to make you laugh, come on Anna... We are on Earth ! 
- I know ! And we have a mission... a mission ?
- Eh ? A mission ? We had a mission ?

I start watching the sky, hoping to find our Father and ask for the mission a million times without answers. And the story begin, we were blocked on earth, with a reason that we can't remember what. Thank you Dad. I start walking leaving the bloody river behind me, searching for a village or a city. My brother were following me like a duckling.

Reviews

[Srchaud]

Alright so there is some grammer and spelling but I am sure this is not your first language, so bravo for doing what I could not.
The story is disjointed at times, I am not sure what is going on at certain points-like the period was that a joke or was someone serious.
I like the beginning I think its decently written and interesting. Waking up to a dead body and not knowing if you killed the person or not is cool. I also am a sucker for angel stories so I am alread hooked the moment I read wings.
The idea is solid( in my opinion) Although there is some work ahead in mastering english writing, there is emerging skill and hope you continue.

[Sunrys]

Hey ! At first, I'm French so yes, English is not my first language but I'm doing my best to writte something with sense and grammatically good. Sometimes asking friends to help me in writting.
Actually, I'm thanking you for your constructive comments, thank you one more time.
Finally, this story will continue when I dream the story, and sadly it's not happening yet. All this story is, in fact, my dreams.

I'm glad you like, tho. Thank you again, maybe you'll read next stories. ;D