Static

Blah

E m p t y your eye sockets

a n d

Replace them with t

                              e

                                 l

                                    e

 v

    i

      s

         i

           o

              n                  screens.

Close your M I N D

a n d

see

Another man's

D R E A M S.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think

Reviews

[Danse Macabre]

@Matthew - I really don't know what her smiling in the picture has to do with poetry, but that's just my opinion, either way she's attractive enough with out having to smile, and I can say this cause iv'e known her for quite some time now, keep it up Adora.

-Zack.

[writing mojo]

This is so clever and short slopping rays
word typography, I love it's speed, the poem rides right home...to dreams with in dreams

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Adora,

I do love Canadian women...Although you should be smiling in your picture. What do I think? I like the format it kinda adds to the poem. Not too much to steal the attention but enough to add interest. Feels surreal. I enjoyed.

Would you want to see what I dream about? Would you consider it a nightmare or a rush like I do? Ponering moments.

Always,

Matthew

[David W Moore III]

Nicely done. I have one called Static as well but it's on a whole different subject. This one works well and sends out a definite truth

[i am skeleton jelly]

i like that the word television looks like it's on two frames of film reel

definitely agree with the message here, too, or at least what i perceive as the message

[Michael X]

wow, I loved this, intensely abstract, original and just freaky.
brilliant job Adora, the meaning really draws thoughts to ponder the
nature of the imagery, simply potent. marvelous form, keep em coming.