All to Show

A gentle embrace, but a strong hold;

All to show your heart o gold.

A gentle voice, but intense meaning;

All to bring a heart, fast beating.

A love so deep, there is no chance

For escape- it has started,

This slow dance.

For all time we will see,

Everything we can be!

Reviews

[b.platte]

I love poems that are easy to read. That seem to be written to a beat. This is one of those. (Except for the transition from there is no chance--for escape)

I really enjoyed this and the message it is sending.

Good work. :)

[Yellow_Rose]

Thanks!! i was a little worried the "stutter" would make it sound bad.

[Alexa Tasch]

wow short but great! It flows well and has a sweet emotion! Nice poem!

[Yellow_Rose]

Thank you!! :) Im not good at writing without emotion.

[Alexa Tasch]

You're welcome!