Corruption

Corruption

A Poem by Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin

Art for the evil
Getting away with all things
Corruption consumes...

© 2010 Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin


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. in south-east asia at least ... this is the true picture of corruption ... skillfully done ... your mastery over brevity shines through ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Picturing souls as work of art is beautiful....it took me awhile to get this one, and still I may be wrong....regardless enjoyed it...good work
Peace
Robin

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Izwoahscene

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Add "That" infront of "corruption consumes". Or you could change the last ine to "Consumed by corruption". Really well portrayed.

The evil get away with acts that are bound to infiltrate corruption.

An easy understand! Well done! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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gripping ~ composed perfectly to invite reflective meditation~

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin
Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin

Lahore, Pakistan



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I'm an amateur writer, who enjoys to write a lot. I almost write anything that comes to my mind, or what I am asked to write. My genres range from fantasy fiction to journal blogs and poetry to haiku... more..

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