Two Beautiful Stars and a Time Apart

About love and regret...

Your smile is like flowers budding for the first time

As the sun rise for spring time right after winter ends

Beauty never been so sweet as the moon lay at your feet

God himself took his precious time in craving you

Oh sweet nightingale please let your voice be heard

Lovely melodies, wonderful poetry, you do sing

Your eyes is of fire burning with passion

As distance galaxies collide into each other

Forming wonders of the world that no one has ever seen

Or ever heard of, yet, still savior of many souls

Wanting the privilege to be granted of your presences

Many has ask to be part of and many shall never be

At last there is one close to your heart

A seedling that you did produce

And just like you she has all of your qualities

Your eyes of fire, Your smile that's a bouquet of flowers

The angles did rejoice on that day of her birth

Time was timid, Time was shy, and you did ask of him

"Would like to hold her?" She was fragile and till this day

Time only regret is that he never seized the moment....

Author's Note

Enjoy my writerscafe friends

Reviews

[Laura Lynn]

Do you review poetry? I just revised something I had written last night "A Letter to Louisiana" which it is much better than the previous version, but next year were I writing a letter it could be better or much different, for I was not strict with myself in writing it and with the meter or form. This is lovely. Lovely symmetry and portrait of someone and a seedling that she did produce, a little girl child. Yes, this woman is a goddess the way you put it, when was she born? It sounds like a long time ago. It is not lovely to say so in so many words, but you have a gift of fire in the eyes of a lexicon, the words buoyed about like a buoy on ocean wave

[Alex Boyd]

Please be my editor and yes I do review poetry.... Especially when I like it... I've review some of your work... Why you ask??? and once again please be my editor I highly need one... See I'm one of those writers who writes... It's hard for me to edit my own stuff because it always sounds right in my head lol

[Afraa]

You have a way with words, Alex! I love how you bring God into your poems. That makes your poems all the more stronger and beautiful. Keep writing!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

So cool I really think its awesome! Your have such a way with your words! good job!
Keep on writing!

C. Lee Battaglia

[armin]

Alex, that was nicely done. Much enjoyed it, nicely penned and imagery was quite beautiful and vivid. Given lines were really wonderful,
Your eyes is of fire burning with passion
As distance galaxies collide into each other
Forming wonders of the world that no one has
ever seen
Keep the good work coming.
Have a nice time writing.