P.S.

P.S.

A Poem by Zeo Writer
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Very slow rock/R&B type song.

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To the black hair beauty
Love is on my mind
Your passion awakes me
And turns back time
To a place in my heart
Where scars seem to vanish
Every moment with you
Lights my furnace
In a bed of roses
I lay you down
And i whisper to your ear...

"Baby this feels right
Give me all the love
Give me all your world
I'll never let go
We don't have to rush
We don't have to miss
Those beautiful times
That wonderful bliss
P.S.--I wanna make love with you"

To the black hair beauty
We can make all are dreams come true
It's never ending
And all for you
And I wanna
Take you to this endless grace
In a bed of roses
I lay you down
And i whisper to your ear...

"Baby this feels right
Give me all the love
Give me all your world
I'll never let go
We don't have to rush
We don't have to miss
Those beautiful times
That wonderful bliss
P.S.--I wanna make love with you"

Baby show me the way
Let it be known
That you fell the same!!

(solo)

In a bed of roses
I lay you down
And i whisper to your ear...

"Baby this feels right
Give me all the love
Give me all your world
I'll never let go
We don't have to rush
We don't have to miss
Those beautiful times
That wonderful bliss
P.S.--I wanna make love with you

Baby this feels right
Give me all the love
Give me all your world
I'll never let go
We don't have to rush
We don't have to miss
Those beautiful times
That wonderful bliss
P.S.--I wanna be the one"

© 2010 Zeo Writer




Reviews

I'd love to be this black haired beauty! What charming words of allure, what romantic trappings of desire and adoration! I love this, thanks for sending it to me!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I agree this would make a very good song. nicely done

Posted 14 Years Ago


this would make a very good song, nd the lady its four must be very very special

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 8, 2010
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