ummmm..

Blasting  music in my ears

When all im trying to do is hide my fears

I'm just a face unseen by most eyes

They think i'm a monster because of my lies

 

I try so hard with fake laughs and smiles

But my unspoken actions are horrendous and vile

People ask why i never cry,

I have no emotions, dont ask why.

 

People say im a soul sucker

When really im just a wity mother f****r

Im apparently an emo cutter s**t

At least im being myself,well somewhat.

 

I've been damned a thousand times

You act like leaving is a crime.

They all say im going to hell,

But I say im doing just swell.

 

Yes of course i need medication to sleep at night,

-(stopped here)

 

 

Author's Note

Dont have name and isnt finished.. also im horrible at rhyming -__-

Reviews

[Maraline-Elijah]

i like this one it almost takes you to high school;) where peole smack a lable on you and leave you hanging on by finger tips.

[lei]

well written...

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

You definitely have a unique style. I really love this one. It would make a really great song I think as well :)

[Secret Valentine]

No this rhyme is good. and it shows who you are. good job. I love your writing. Its very expressive. I used to cut too. And i take meds to go to sleep. I like how you put urself in your writing.

Yeah man rhyming is hard because most of the time you should use big words. Big words hurt my thinking pan.

[Coyote Poetry]

Many good titles in this poem. You made a lot of strong statements in this poem. Few people don't hurt and use other people. Need and want make us always want more. This is good poetry. You made me think.
Coyote