Darling

It takes a couple of goes
but you get up in the end
drop your book on mine and climb
over, closing my arm around you
and looking up at me with eyes that see
what the years have trained us out of

aware and expectant 

Reviews

[ChemicalMadness]

Have you thought about expanding this one a bit? I like it, but it feels somewhat incomplete as-is...who am I to judge completeness? But would love to see more.

CM.

[_mal]

Thank you forreading, this is the one thing I've written though that came out exactly how I meant it

[ChemicalMadness]

That's exactly how it should be!!

[caesarkreshen]

I like this. It has a personality.

[h d e rushin]

"aware and expectant" Takes one to the very edge of understanding..
Good work. hder

[Chris]

Quite an observation...

[...]

. ohhhhh ... this is an amazing piece of writing, dear _mal ...
. i was waiting to read something new from you ...
. thank you for this gem of a post ...