Somebody out there

Somebody borrow me some thoughts
I am tired of my old repetitive cries

I feel old
And stupid

Are you travelling
Does he burn for you
Are you ambitious and want to conquer the world

Can I borrow your thoughts
Because I am tired of this scorn and mourn
And I have white hair and wrinkles.

Reviews

[JD Major]

Than you for your thoughts! ...
now lend me your ear ...
Sometimes, for a much-needed fresh-perspective, I borrow thoughts from my younger self :)

[a_methyste]

Yes I know I am old on some parts of me. How I want to reach there but I fail at times. Hugs.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Wow, you wrote me here.
White hair, wrinkles
a buffet of stale words

I do need to borrow some that are fresh.

[a_methyste]

:) What can I say.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

A nice poem about old age...
I guess at times we all can get tired of our own thoughts.
Good poetic expression. I enjoyed reading it.
Keep it up! Take good care.
😃

[a_methyste]

Thanks a lot my dear.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome.
😃

[Arundass TP]

Borrowing it's later you have to give it. Permanent sadness and madness is the result. Good poem. Enjoyed reading 👍

[a_methyste]

Thank you my friend for stopping by and reading and for your words. Lots of love and hugs.

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend.....

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m not sure you’d like to borrow my thoughts. They can be fickle creatures and a bit mercurial at times. Just ask my “friend” lover what ever you’d like to call him. He get needy text one day and irritated ones a couple hours later. I told him yesterday I may not text for a little while cause I was irritated with missing him. Shrugs it shall pass as it always does.

[a_methyste]

Sometimes when you are very angry with yourself you would borrow anything. Just for a while though. I get the same episodes with my lovers. But the longing. Oh the longing.

[Poetic Beauty]

I have those moments with my lover. I don’t get to see him very often and it’s frustrating

[a_methyste]

I like your lover. He makes me read good poetry and talk about nice things. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

He’s a good guy the situation isn’t ideal

[a_methyste]

Yes I agree.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thought for the day…
Entanglements are excite lol

[John the Baptist]

Take heart. I am 78 and the creative pot yet bubbles. All you have to do is convince yourself it's there.

[a_methyste]

I am glad for you dear. Hugs and love.

[Jibey]

Ah, we all need renewal and the energy of youth. But it brought its problems. You may feel knackered but for sure there is plenty of life there still... the mind is the key.

[a_methyste]

Yes for sure the mind is crucial.

[Davidgeo]

I've felt this exact way before. More than once. The last time involved grey hair all around.

If you are over 40 and single you'd better be wealthy, very personable, or uniquely manipulative or criminally hot... otherwise it's incel JO time perpetual.

I prefer the personality disorder to the incel. Those dudes are just pathetic... still playing mini golf for a "living".

[a_methyste]

I could not agree more. That is the reality we live in.