Beautiful Eyes

I can sense it from miles away,

I see it in my dreams,

The color of my garden,

Fourth to last color in the rainbow,

Its the brightest of them all,

Its my inspiration,

Its your eyes.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

In love You see them every where

[Jersey]

I liked how you took all the bits and pieces of lines and gave them a common ground. Basically what I'm sayings I liked how you hinted to the main idea of the poem without actually saying it until the end and in the title.

[Needy]

:)) eyes are the most amazing thing about a person. well I think so

[Sports Girl]

Nice

[KaySea]

very good

[Norma M Sutton]

I like this. Very nice and to the point.

[Moonflower]

This is just lovely :)

[Maurice]

Very good. I enjoyed reading this.

[paul]

great poem

[Jonathan De Elvira]

wow, that's really powerful...
Idk wht to say about this but I'm sure if u use tht as a pick up line then you'll get him/her...

its beautiful...great job :)