A Poem by ur_ginger_girl

A poem that just came to me. I'm dealing with a lot of crap, and I guess my feelings and thoughts congealed into this.

Accepting that 
you'll probably
end up young
and in a home.

accepting that
you'll be a 
whipping boy

Sitting in your 
room clinging
to the only vices
that you have.

Smoking a 
cigarette to 
shave a few
years off your 

and ingesting 
caffeine to make 
life slightly more

You realize that 
your 19 and 
that one man
rightfully made
you give up on life 

© 2014 ur_ginger_girl

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i like moking as well at morning window. you write very nice sweet pain of life . so i just wish you dont give up at all.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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ok, I get it, that is freakishly making a certain sense in terms of plot shock value revelation technique

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on November 12, 2014
Last Updated on November 12, 2014
Tags: Acceptance, hell, men, bitterness, giving up, depression

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