Sleepless because of You

More than just a crush

Oh what a rush
More than a crush
What a lucky day
Got me thinking all day
I know you don't know what I'm feeling
Maybe you suspect
In retrospect,
It was meant to be
This way
Sleepless because of you

Reviews

[Ana Papaya]

That energy or buzz when we're crushing on someone can really keep us awake at night.
Nice brevity.

[Anita Frader]

This is probably why they were sleepless in Seattle. 💙

[Sharrumkin]

A nice poem conveying the excitement of love.

[Mint Rayne]

That is cute.What was the inspiration? I love it.

[Jodash]

I was listening to a Kanye West song from his album, 808's and Heartbreak. There's a line that goes:
Why would she make calls out the blue,
Now I'm awake, sleepless in you"

[Dara]

I think we can all relate to this ‘sleepless night’. I admire how you are able to put so much feeling in your words. Great poem!

[Jodash]

Thanks a lot Dara and welcome to my corner of the Cafe! Please feel free have a look and review at some of my older writings. I would really appreciate that.

[Im His Daughter]

Isn't that the truth. Just brooding & lusting over someone... it occupies the mind & doesn't help us much. A great write Jodash.

[Jodash]

Thanks dear

[Matthew Kult]

Excitingly restless. Do they know how you feel? Do they feel the same way? All causes of lack of sleep.

Good write,

With love,

Matthew

[Jodash]

Thanks a lot Matthew

[Arundass TP]

Every one moves atleast once through this episode. Good poem

[Jodash]

Thank you Arundass

[Chris Shaw]

Someone has a crush. Lovely little poem. I can remember my teenage crush. Dreamy and sleepless nights. Wondering whether I could get him to notice me. Nicely penned lines.

Chris

[Jodash]

Ah not a crush on my part :) this is purely whimsical. Thanks for your review.

[Cherrie Palmer]

What better typic for a poem that a secret crush and confession. Really good work.

[Jodash]

Thank you Cherrie!