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A very short but true story.

Three pieces
of blown glass
on dark wood

and a cello hummed
as if I were
the concert hall

Author's Note

A little piece of,happiness when visiting a friend the other day...

Reviews

[Nefertiti Virtudes Ahme..]

I do like this. Not only because the Cello is my favorite string instrument but because of how you managed to paint the picture in few words. I could only imagine what was going on in mind.

[adichie]

Ah, my friend... I was visiting a girlfriend of mine, and fell in love with her art and the way she displayed it on a small table. You know when the air rips open like an envelope, and things leap though that airless space right into your heart? Well, that’s what happened that day.

Thank you so much for noticing this tiny little moment!!! 🙂🙂

Deb

[Chris Shaw]

Love this brevity Deb. I can see it clearly. Blown glass on dark wood. A wonderful appreciation of another's art. Clearly it moved you.

Chris.

[adichie]

Thanks, Chris!!! I wanted to show some of the joy I feel thanks to the people in my life.:):)

Deb

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is poetry with edge. It is brief but every word with sharp meaning crafted into feeling!

[adichie]

Thank you so much for a beautiful comment, John!!! :):)

Deb

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, what images here....sight, sound, feel, ....

appreciating the art of a friend...and you shared yours with your friend by writing this gem.

j.

[adichie]

Haha! Thanks a million, Jacob!:):)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your poetry, Deb...
I am quite enjoying it.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your brevity here is striking. The cello was a lovely touch. I bet your friend is thrilled!

[adichie]

Thanks, Kelly!!! I did send this to my friend as a thank you for our visit. Her blown glass (and her dark wood) makes me want to cry, it’s so lovely.

She was thrilled, actually! What a lovely reminder.

Thank you.

Deb :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The simple statements made the reader vision your words. I wanted to read and know more. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[adichie]

Thanks so much!!! I tend to write simple or abstract, either or, no space in between. :):)

I am very glad you enjoyed this piece, Coyote.

Adix

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.