Infidelity: Part I- A Wife's Fury

to the mistress

You are a lovely woman

with face inviting envy.

You have curvaceous figure

and lips that taste like honey.

It's no surprise, my sweetheart,

he's under such a spell.

I just dropped by to say hello

and hope that all is well.

He must have had forgotten

to mention me to you.

But see, he's fond of secrets.

(I trust you know that, too!)

He never even told me

you're all he's thinking about.

And yes, I was so shocked, my dear,

when I did figure out.

He was never himself these days,

coming home at dawn.

Whenever I took off my clothes

he's not at all turned on.

And so, one night, I watched him sleep

and knew he's not the same.

He moaned aloud his words of love;

It's no longer my name.

We used to be the perfect pair

until you came along.

So don't you dare give me that look

as if you've done no wrong.

Let's stop this act because I know

you well-devised the games.

If you keep playing, soon you'll see

the danger of your flames.

Oh, gorgeous girl, heed my advice:

Run while you still can.

Nothing spells more trouble than

stealing another's man.

And one more thing, remember this

if you cherish your life:

The next time that you fall in love,

he shouldn't have a wife.

Author's Note

Google is having its issues right now. I can't find a good picture.

Thank you for reading!

Reviews

[Quoting Ravens]

Ooh, packed and powerful. Pleasantly amusing.

[Blue]

Thank you a lot, QR.

[Donald]

You are a scary woman. But you have a great message to say. I would never cross on you. It shows great emotion and relays it to the reader. well done.

[Blue]

Just empty threats, Donald. I am never attracted to violence. Haha. Thank you.

[Jack...]

Blue, this was very well written and I can't think anyone wouldn't get the message. Loud and clear my friend.

[Blue]

Thank you, Jack.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The aggressive nature of the piece allows the reader to ponder the debts, well done, good read.

[Blue]

Thank you, Thomas.

[Dayran]

Honey ... these days she might have used the man to get to the wife ... you just can't tell ... but for something with some social commitment this poem is the cream on the cake. Nice one.

[Blue]

Haha. Your words just made me smile. Thank you, Dayran.

[Kevin Dean]

I really enjoyed it. The idea of actually rhyming in a passive aggressive manner also. Nice.

[Blue]

Thankyou, Kevin.

[Praveeta]

You have portrayed feelings associated with betrayal marvellously. Well written piece.

[Blue]

Thank you, Praveeta.

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[DIVYA]

Hell hath the fury! I just loved this write for it's expression of anger and I loved the confidence with which you did it. I had written a similar poem on this subject some time back. It was named "SAY NO".
Have a lovely day.

[Blue]

Thank you, Divya! Cool picture, anyway.

[Cassie]

There is nothing as painful as finding out that you have been cheated on. Thank you for sharing I enjoyed reading

[Blue]

Thank you, too, Cassie.

[Brook]

Such a brilliant poem, you're a wonderful writer.
I aspire to write just as well as you someday.

[Blue]

Such an honor to be an inspiration. Thank you, Brookly.