DREAMS

Tears flow from heart
Which has been torn  apart

Blood flows from pain
Which never seem to drain

Love flows from feelings 
Which always seem to be hurting 

Dreams flow from your brain
Which gives you hope to live again

Reviews

[Honey54]

wow this was short but amazing each line pierced me...very true and very NICE

[Jazique]

Wow powerful in such few words. As everything flows and drain from the the rips and pains in life and the dreams you wish to make of them. Well done.

[Ray]

Thumbs up ! The only thing is that the third couplet doesn't rhyme, but it still is good.

[Destinyxi]

Very nice poem. Short but deep. Keep it up!

[Aehr]

expressive and beautiful. thank you for sharing.

[Barbara Walker]

This poem expresses the ups and downs, the negative and positive and how we all want to have hope! Good write!

[Sean]

One of your better ones.

How about:

"Love flows from feelings
Which is always healing"?

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Okay. The third couplet kinda of throws it off a bit. I doesn't rhyme like the rest of them and it interrupts the flow.

[Becky]

I noticed that the third couplet is the only one that doesn't rhyme, not sure if that was intentional or not.

Other than that, wonderfully bittersweet piece.

[Kuhr Gred]

Dreams flow from your brain
Which gives you hope to live again --> I like this stanza... really inspires me.. haha GREAT WRITE.. thanks for sharing
- Kuhr gred