I WISH YOU LOVED ME MOM

I WISH YOU LOVED ME MOM

A Poem by afra

Now I see those lucky girls

Whose mothers are always around

But you are never there for me

Like you are already under the ground


You give me money

You give me all I need

You call me honey

But you are still not the person you were supposed to be


All the stuff you do for me

Makes me cry

You say that its the best for me

You make me wish to die


You want me to be like you

Do you want me to be fake?

You never see the pain in my eyes

Cause you are too busy pointing out my mistakes


I wish you can be like dad

Who is always there for me

He loves me for who I am

Not busy trying to change me


You never fulfill the promises

That you love to make

You never give love

Just like to take


You are no longer a stranger to me

Cause you have neglected me for such a long time

You leave me in tears

Like every thing is okay and fine


Your hate made  me questioned you

Are you really the person who gave me birth??

Cause you are the reason of my broken dreams

You are the reason of my pain and hurt


Your words mentally beats me down

You call me weak

You are too busy telling me what to do

You don't even let me speak


I wish I can stop loving you

Just like you have stopped loving me

Our relationship is never like it should be

I wish that you loved me

© 2012 afra


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Sad story. Very moving. Reminds me of the anger I held against my mother. That was until I became a parent myself. Then I realised how damn hard it is to be a parent. Let alone managing to be a good one. So I chose forgiveness. Especially because I learned shed been dealt a bad hand from her parents before.



Posted 8 Years Ago


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So sad

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow the emotion here is so strong the anger that is being shown to your mother is so strong the poem itself is very well written packed with everything needed for a good poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well ... that was full of pathos and, sadly, extremely sincere and to the point. I think you should talk to your mum, because if things are like that, there's something that must be done, mothers are never perfect and they're always bossy but if yours is too much just shout it out "hey, I exist, what about asking me what I think for once'!"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Sam
Great poem and portrayal of emotions; going through the same feelings with my mother right now. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm watching something similar go on now.. So sad
Great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sad story. Very moving. Reminds me of the anger I held against my mother. That was until I became a parent myself. Then I realised how damn hard it is to be a parent. Let alone managing to be a good one. So I chose forgiveness. Especially because I learned shed been dealt a bad hand from her parents before.



Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

good portrayal of emotions, and.. i guess some people can relate to this. well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a very powerful poem, I feel the pain, great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emotional filled truth felt deep within, expressed well. 8th stanza, 1st line should be,"Your hate made me question you" and third line should be, "Cause you are the reason for my broken dreams" Fourth line, "You are the reason for my pain and hurt"
9th Stanza, first line, "Your words mentally break me down" Last stanza, first line, "I wish I could stop loving you" second line, drop the word "just" third line, "Our relationship has never been, as it should be"


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honest and brutally sad, filled with raw emotionally driven feeling. I thank the heavens that neither of my parents were this way.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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