Nothing Is Left.

Nothing Is Left.

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland

Mack and I broke up. Chloe is dead. Life is amazing, isn't it?


  Nothing is left.
  It is all gone.
  All of the smiles
  And laughs.
  All of the tears
  And insults.
  The only thing that
  Remains is my shattered
  Beaten and broken,
  Twitching on the floor.
  You took everything when you left. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland

Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
This sucks

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it doesn't suck. it's simple, which is what I like about your style of writing. the basic lines also really work for the theme of the poem, because it's as if someone took all the words from your mouth (keyboard?) too. You have a great talent of getting your message across while saying so little. So while the subject is sad, you still have kick-a*s writing skills.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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That was a very good poem, but a very tragic write. I miss Chloe, and I'm sorry about you and Mack. I guess that's just the way it is. Great write though.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This doesn't suck at all. Its simple, beautifully written and it expresses feelings well. It's a great job-Don't doubt urself so much. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago

It does not. The imagery it just lovely and splendid. You have your own way with words and you created this within your mind. And it means something to someone. And I just loved reading it. Be confident and proud of your work!

Posted 12 Years Ago

It doesn't suck. You are showing human emotion and you are direct to the point in the poem. I like the emotion and the strong ending. A excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very strong and full of sadness. Watch some comedy movies? *grabs popcorn* cheer up soon :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Sad but simple a good write

Posted 12 Years Ago

Aw that's so sad. Life totally sucks eh?:(

Posted 12 Years Ago

Im sorry just try to smile, a smile can change everything

Posted 12 Years Ago

why do you keep putting yourself and your pennings down? this is good I wish I'd thought of it. It is the simple poems that express most vividly the thoughts of the poet and make no mistake about it you "Alice" are a poet a fledging poet but still a poet. Your writings will improve with experence there is no help for it it is a natural phnomanon.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I feel your pain, time does heal the soul my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on April 19, 2011
Last Updated on April 19, 2011


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