Rewind, Replay, Pause And Stop.

Rewind, Replay, Pause And Stop.

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland
"

I don't know...

"
  I want to rewind
  Time, as if it
  Were a movie.

  I want to replay
  All the perfect
  Moments we spent
  Together.

  I want to pause
  The moment where
  Everything fell apart.

  I want to stop
  Life.

  I want to never be
  played again. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


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Alice In My Own Wonderland
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I love the way you laid this poem out...the red/black This is a brilliant poem ...very good1

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good one Alice, if only we could rewind time my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ain't a bad poem. You desire what we all would want. Able to rewind time and hold on to the good moments. A strong ending to a very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 6 people found this review constructive.

this is so not bad it was brilliant ... sounds like a couple of lines in a few of my poem lol you went further with it and did a really good job



Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 5 people found this review constructive.

again another great poem, you are on a role keep it going girl, way to go

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was cool! it was a unique idea. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


stop it ! no poem of yours is bad is great !!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I don't think this is bad! I like the whole concept...if only we could have this control over our lives. Things would be a lot easier.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is brilliant, Alice.. not bad at all.. an excellent poem with great usage of imagery.. the last stanza is a zinger! I concur.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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