My Wonderland

My Wonderland

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland
"

Many things are missing from my Wonderland...

"
  My wonderland is
  Not pretty,
  And filled with singing
  Flowers.

  It is dark and bloody,
  And filled with screaming
  Demons.

  My wonderland doesn't
  Have a wise caterpillar,
  Who gives me advice.

  It has a tall elder man
  Who sits in a chair
  And listens to me complain. 

  My wonderland is
  Not what I wanted it to be.

  It is not pretty and filled
  With singing flowers.

  It does not have a wise
  Caterpillar.

  It doesn't have you. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


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Alice In My Own Wonderland
Just some random thing...

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The Wonderland of reality

Posted 9 Years Ago


In the new version of Alice in Wonderland. Caterpillar wasn't always nice till the end. Life is what you make it. Can be a living hell or a search for peace and calm. Choice of each person. I like your description. I was surprised by the positive ending. Even you can be saved. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Random doesn't mean 'bad'. I quite liked this poem. Quite often our 'Wonderlands' are not what most people would consider 'wonderful'. Very well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


so unique I liked it a lot amazing flow and the imagery was oddly beautiful lol



Posted 9 Years Ago


Wonderful work, excellent poem, i really like your world of wonderland.

Posted 9 Years Ago


what unique place to go i love the poem:)!

Posted 9 Years Ago


well the "wise caterpiller" was just a guy who was high all the time. And wonderland was very dark and blood. Twisted really, they suger coat it for kids. But any way i like this poem. nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love form of this poem and the repetition of the flowers and the caterpillar. My wonderland isn't exactly what I want it to be either. I have longings that haven't been met yet... and you expressed your longing with the last line so very well. Excellent poem! Definitely a fave and a 100/100 rating.

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's not random. I really much loved this. I have my own wonderland also, as I gaze into the void and imagine. Though when we come out we see that the world is not always what we wanted it to be. This expresses it very nicely. And I am glad to have read it. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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