My Wonderland

My Wonderland

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland

Many things are missing from my Wonderland...

  My wonderland is
  Not pretty,
  And filled with singing

  It is dark and bloody,
  And filled with screaming

  My wonderland doesn't
  Have a wise caterpillar,
  Who gives me advice.

  It has a tall elder man
  Who sits in a chair
  And listens to me complain. 

  My wonderland is
  Not what I wanted it to be.

  It is not pretty and filled
  With singing flowers.

  It does not have a wise

  It doesn't have you. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland

Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
Just some random thing...

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The Wonderland of reality

Posted 9 Years Ago

In the new version of Alice in Wonderland. Caterpillar wasn't always nice till the end. Life is what you make it. Can be a living hell or a search for peace and calm. Choice of each person. I like your description. I was surprised by the positive ending. Even you can be saved. A excellent poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Amazing poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Random doesn't mean 'bad'. I quite liked this poem. Quite often our 'Wonderlands' are not what most people would consider 'wonderful'. Very well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago

so unique I liked it a lot amazing flow and the imagery was oddly beautiful lol

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wonderful work, excellent poem, i really like your world of wonderland.

Posted 9 Years Ago

what unique place to go i love the poem:)!

Posted 9 Years Ago

well the "wise caterpiller" was just a guy who was high all the time. And wonderland was very dark and blood. Twisted really, they suger coat it for kids. But any way i like this poem. nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love form of this poem and the repetition of the flowers and the caterpillar. My wonderland isn't exactly what I want it to be either. I have longings that haven't been met yet... and you expressed your longing with the last line so very well. Excellent poem! Definitely a fave and a 100/100 rating.

Posted 9 Years Ago

It's not random. I really much loved this. I have my own wonderland also, as I gaze into the void and imagine. Though when we come out we see that the world is not always what we wanted it to be. This expresses it very nicely. And I am glad to have read it. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on April 23, 2011
Last Updated on April 23, 2011


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