A Picture Of A Girl

  Her hair is strawberry blond.

  Her eyes are brown.

  Her skin is pale.

  She looks young.

  About ten years old.

  Her face is curled up

  in a smile of joy.

  I am holding this picture

  of her.

  This picture of the

  girl I once was. 

Author's Note

:/ Bad once again...

Reviews

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

I enjoyed reading this. It's a really good poem. You are a brilliant poet!

[Coyote Poetry]

Looking back in time is always interesting. Life can travel too fast. Your poetry is interesting. With age we write with a different pen. Age can bring sadness and heart brake. Being young and hopeful in your writing is a good thing. We have enough sadness around us. Life is to celebrate and have fun. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Conner Is Dead 2/14/1..]

I agree With Super Gabby This is excellent and a wonderful write :)

[Nobody.]

:/ can you actually make this face? lol!
it's very good! once again, you've managed to make a profound statement in simple language. I like that a lot. Many poets make simple statements in profound language. best not to do that. it's like painting a pretty picture on dog poop. lol. you have a keeper here! well done!
cheers!

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

very well written (: i like it. It wasn't bad at all. It just goes to show how much we have changed over the years, and the progress we have made. Granted all the progress and change may not be in our favor, but it is still change and progress. In the end, it benefits us somehow (: I really enjoyed reading this poem! It made me go find my old picture of me and look at it :) Oh nostalgia< 3
Thank you for posting this poem! It was a great read, and though it gives off a slightly sad vibe to it, it also gets the rest of us thinking about our pasts, and what we used to look/be like. Keep writing! You're doing awesome (: