A Gentle Breeze..by Michael

A gentle breeze parts the curtain as it touches my face.
The blanket folds back on her side of the bed where she used
To sleep. A dream of an impression becomes a reality on her pillow
when I awake. The one year absence of when she left is caught
Up in the passion of a missing embrace. The window no longer
Needs to be open, for my gentle breeze has returned...
 
 
 
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Reviews

[natureislelove]

Its a wonderful poem, and very nicely pened together.
All the best in your writing.

[Michael Reisman]

glad you liked it.

[WindsorWolf28]

Very nice! :) I like the way you organize your words (the formation)

[Michael Reisman]

Thank you! See my 19 books of short stories at www.michaelreisman.net

[SheWolfNLust]

awe, your each word is absolutely breathtaking, especially your final lines, brilliant imaginary and your word choices are simply divine, I'm glad I stumbled across your writing as I enjoyed your every word, thanks ever so kindly for sharing xoxo

[Michael Reisman]

What a beautiful compliment!! Please take a look at my 19 books of short stories at www.michaelreisman.net