Hollowing Inside

Hollowing Inside

A Chapter by Akshay Rawal

Something's hollowing inside,

It's all from swallowing inside

Pain, and efforts vain, the stains

Of character, faults insane.

It's not loneliness, cause

There's only mess, loss

Of smile, amidst

piles, and lists.

Of those who care,

 they're there

They stare,

at my pair of eyes, 

And layers of cries 

they ignore, 

The sore, 

the gore, 

cause it bores

All. It's time to fall

for an unknown call

And crawl down, 

stroll, frown

In the queer town

of feelings, 

which deep down 

are reeling.

© 2020 Akshay Rawal

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Added on September 12, 2020
Last Updated on September 20, 2020
Tags: Self-expression, Personal, Introspective


Akshay Rawal
Akshay Rawal

Brampton, Ontario, Canada

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