Sorry

Sorry

A Poem by al25
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About my ex-gf

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I'm sorry.

I'm sorry I lied to you all those times.

I'm sorry I made you cry all those nights.

You said you loved me, I laughed at you.

You said you need me, I ignored you. 

I promised I'd protect you then I hurt you.

I promised I'd be with you then I betrayed you.

You were the sun I was the clouds.

You were the bolt I was the hammer.

You were the drum I was the drummer.

You were the smile I was the frown.

Now I sit here wishing the rain would fall and take away all the things I said, all those things I did.

I'm sorry I infiltrated you.

I'm sorry I deflated you.

I'm sorry I played you.

I'm sorry I betrayed you.

I'm sorry I hurt you.

And most of all I'm sorry I never said goodbye.

© 2010 al25


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This is so sad, but so well expressed.


Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sad poem. But its good and i like it a lot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is painful to read. It's rare to see something written from this side of the relationship. It's a good write, and I really hope that, even if you didn't show her this, you at least finally told her.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love this poem. It's so sad.... and i love it. Nothing more to say then that..

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