Like I do

I just wanna see you bleed

I'm so good at what I do

And you know there's no way you'll be through

Cause there ain't nobody who can seduce you like I do

 

I just wanna see you cry

I'm so good at what I do

And you know there's nothing to save you from you

Cause their ain't nobody who can hurt you like I do

 

I like it when you're on the floor

Begging for more

It feels so good to see you cry

I don't know why

 

I just wanna see you hurt

I'm so good at what I do

And you know there's no one to run to

Cause their ain't nobody who does it like I do it to you

 

 

Reviews

[Sports Girl]

This a good poem. Kinda twisted in a way. But still good.

[ashley]

This is chilling. The typos made an otherwise great poem a little distracting. They're easily fixed:
1st stanza, 3rd line: "now" should be "know"; "theres" should be "there's"
4th line: "their" should be "there"
2nd stanza, 3rd line: "now" should be "know"; "theres" should be "there's"
3rd stanza, 1st line: "your" should be "you're"
4th line: "dono" should be "don't know" or if you're slanging it, "dunno"
4th stanza, 3rd line: "now", "know"; "theres", "there's"
(and for all stanzas, I think "aint" is "ain't")
Great poem, really unnerving. Good job!