chasm

we are

separated
by our

perceptions
of difference
as we
argue through
our genetic
sameness
over themes
mind numbingly
ad-infinitude
destined

for high

yet

sullen climes

that spread 
as checkered

blanket on

rock 
or bitter

spray of sweat
across 

impossible

chasm

Reviews

[emmah]

- ah!!!
the dog can chase its tail - unstoppable - the control's in our control - and for once - everyone's watching - this mania can go on - just as long as we please - and when they stop - we shall start - and when they win - we shall part - and this ceaseless activity - can go on - just as long as we please!!!! -
three cheers for vaccines!!!! :D
i love this - and like serah - i am a die hard believer - in the celebration of diversity!!!! cutting and precise and relevant!!! love it!!!

[...]

. true that ... and perhaps we need to find better ways to celebrate diversity than endless discussion ... beautifully written ...

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

we are

separated
by our

perceptions
of difference
These lines for me are my favorite here...
excellent write as always.

[Wildfleour]

Sigh..........

[MiidniightSoul]

I really enjoy these type of poems and your's is a very beautiful and wonderful write.

[Miss Coral]

I usually cannot easily read this type of structure, but it felt the poem beautifully. Another wonderful piece.. great write.

-Coral-

[paul]

wow. that is really beautiful.

[Moonflower]

I like the structure of this piece, over all a very good read. Lovely work, sir. I enjoyed it. :)

[Ed Hart]

yeah, but we make really cool weapons, and bug sprays

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

like teardrops on a streamlet of blood~ what a shame humanity has never learned to overcome the visual scope for insightful spiritual vision~