Let Me😍

Let me love you 

the way you need me to

Let us reclaim that which fell beside

precious seconds, minutes, hours and nights 

never lost, but patiently waiting 

anticipating 

the day we would again believe 

You and me 

the way it was meant to be

Our destiny

complete...

Reviews

[D Ruppert]

This particular piece is brimming with encouragement, optimism, unrelenting desire for love, to keep it alive. Certainly something many seek, only a handful are able to find. The idea of finding that one who completes us will always remain so long as we want and desire it to.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for your comments and time.

Wishing you well.

Alisa💫

[ANTO]

Aloha Alisa - how are you?

I see tenacity in this - a gentle tenacity guided by a faith in fate. I love the phrasing - the lines beginning witgh 'Let me..." , not demanding but pleading and recalling better times - all is not lost.

Now Alisa, dont laugh - you know me by now - Im a joker but...
The final stanza reminded me of Darth Vader and the 'Luke, I'm you're father, join me and together we can rule the galaxy...as is our destiny." scene. Thats just me...

I really loved this special plea my friend. Very moving. :)

[Alisa Js]

Aloha ANTO,

Thank you for your kind words and thoughts.

Star Wars, eh???

That's an interesting perspective...

Destiny!

I love it..

Thanks again for your time.

Alisa ;-)

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~~ ohhhh... this is exquisite, dear alisa... ~~ utterly magical and melodious poetry...

[Alisa Js]

Aloha serah,

Thank you...;-)

Sending you smiles...

Alisa

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~~ you're very welcome... and thank you for the smiles... :)

[Alisa Js]

You are quite welcome. Without love, we cease to exist... with love, life has meaning... and we are new again...

;-)

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~~ absolutely... well said... :)