In Between

the whisper from your soul

calls to me

we meet in the space between each thought

tranquility

bliss,

serene

you never leave

and I find you here

each time I need

I have lived a thousand dreams 

inside this place

each one, 

real.

each one,

complete.

there is no need for words

as words fail...

Reviews

[ANTO]

Aloha Alisa...I hope you are well and still dreaming of Mackinac Island from time to time. ;)

"If language were a liquid, it would be rushing in - instead here we are in a silence more eloquent than any word could ever be..." (Language, S.Vega)
Grasping the ether you both are - but both you and Suzanne successfully convey the feeling of grasping it.

[Alisa Js]

Hello ANTO,

Mackinac Island in Michigan? I have never been there, but did google it and it looks like a fun place to visit. Have you been?

I prefer the Hawaiian islands, to be honest....as you can absolutely get lost in the beauty of the land and sea...

Thank you for stopping by and for your very kind compliment....

I appreciate that and you, as well.

Sending you thoughts of everything amazing....

Alisa ;-)

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-- wow... and i really mean that wow... -- i feel really happy when poets who are actually skilled in wielding words write an ode to that "space" you have written so beautifully about... -- also, i think it's quite remarkable that you accomplished this without using too many words... -- it's really nice to witness your journey into deeper realms of poetic excellence, alisa... -- your journey is enthralling and inspiring... :)

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, kind one. Sending you smiles from across time and space....

😃😃😃😃😃

[.]

-- oh... how thoughtful of you, adorable alisa... and you're very welcome... :)

[Philip Muls]

In the space between thoughts, you find serenity and bliss 'in his soul which never leaves'.

It reminds me of the 'Safe Place' technique when you go to a place in your mind that allows you to be in the moment and let it all be.

I am trying to find this serenity but have yet to succeed. It is great to read it can be done.

Love it. Could you read mine when you find the time ''between thoughts".

[Alisa Js]

Aloha Philip,

Thank you for stopping by. Yes, of course, I will be by soon.
read moreAloha Philip,

Thank you for stopping by. Yes, of course, I will be by soon.

Alisa💫

[Coyote Poetry]

The below lines can stand alone.
"I have lived a thousand dreams
inside this place
each one,
real.
each one,
complete."
When love is near. Words are not needed. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Alisa Js]

Aloha from across the way,

Thank you again for stopping by. I am touched by your words.

Wishing you well.

Alisa💫

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Perdition]

The only words that come to mInd are "I think you got it" ~

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, oh! kind and talented one! 😃😃.

Sending you thoughts of everything amazing~ always

Alisa💫