where we are now

where we are now

A Poem by fracturedblue

 

where we are now

where we find ourselves

colliding
against the truth glass
learn the lies we've
found refuge in

this we find, in
alleys and cigarettes,
blue dresses and christmas
trees,
the spinning flash
of light developing

our grey notions
and these lives
we've learnt to live
and

become too
heartbreakingly honest
with each other
 

© 2009 fracturedblue


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Girl, it's good to read your writing again.

This is absolutely lovely, and, once again, it seemed to read into what's going on in my life with incredible depth.
I especially love the last eight lines or so.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really liked this piece of writing as it flowed so perfectly well!
Great work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I've found love and truth in your writing. This is a great piece of work, and I feel as though it's something you probably wrote in a very short period of time. Also, I think I should let you know, I have three tattoos, all inspired by songs written by Mr. Jonny Rzeznik--Iris, Before it's too Late, I'm Still Here- and plan for Name, Black Balloon, and Broadway to be somewhere on my body before moving onto another band (all my tattoos will be inspired by music). I think that the 90's were severely underrrated and I would like to thank you for this great find.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this poem of yours because it made me reflect on my own life

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awesome. Short, Concise (am I spelling that write?), and sooo true.
"against the truth glass" I really like that, it's good.
Good work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


great poem, I enjoyed the imagery and the sense of other-worldness . . . nice and a readable length. very enjoyable write, I loved it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice poem!!!!!! it makes me wonder where i am at the moment!!! XD

Posted 10 Years Ago



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fracturedblue
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16. female. life. daydreaming. music. writing. the 90�s. poetry. tea. hoodies. thinking. talking. sylvia plath. black. silence. stars. sky. trees. learning. sad songs. the goo goo dolls. .. more..

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