my only you

My only you...

First day, i saw you
first look, i liked you
first breathe, i wanted you
first love, my only you

i asked, how are you?
you replied, im fine, how 'bout you?
i said, im fine too
secretly, i love you

i wish that my only you...
that you would love me too.
coz my life is for you..
one last thing.. i love you♥

Reviews

[Andrea.]

It's very nice... I never knew you can make such a very very lovely poem... so simple but very outstanding :)

[rielovella]

I can really feel the emotion in this poem and I feel the same way. Keep up the good work!

[B.E. Gonzales]

This poem reminds me of my crush. This reminds me of our first chat on Yahoo Messenger. The rhyme and rhyme schemes are good and the message is brilliant. Nice work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very good. To the point with honest and sweet words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Yani De Los Reyes]

aww. Sweet poem Aljude :)

[aljude de guia]

my first published poem