Reckless Gait

Reckless Gait

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
"

are you drunk again? yes, in tears and shadows!

"

Reckless Gait



I am of tears and shadows in reckoning with myself,


i see my blindness trying to kiss the sky,


of all that is real i’m dumbfounded


merrily in sadness i try for what is real


there are stories on my breast of tears and shadows


the gloom of appeal stamped on consciousness


my body lost in the embodiment of sleep


i wander…………………….here…………there


aimlessly walking to my own despair.

© 2016 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Lydia!

I wrote something named Fallen. I'm really scared for today's youth. The candidates, country and the world are all valid fears.

Regards,
Al



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Absolutely....we live in scary times globally and personally as we age.
Thanks Ana,

Fell today, incurred pain, at least a 5 or 6 pain on the pain scale. 10 the worst. Talk about my poem entertaining vision. Wow.......but it still hurts!

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh, reckoning with oneself is the most difficult evaluation we ever have to make. We see ourselves as older, more feeble, more unworthy than others see us. Then we go to sleep.....and we dream. Not always pleasant dreams. What will become of us? Shadows darken in difficult times, but the truth is, the sun is never far. What an emotional introspective write this is, Al. Well written. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


It's often these fantasies that keep us moving and thinking positive.
It's good to hold hope, even in hopeless situations.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks Jacob!

I have 2 knee replacements, 2 hip replacements and walking, at times, feels the strangeness of balance.

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


better to stay in the fantasies...reality is just too harsh these days...and the hangover is very uncomfortable and sad.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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